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穿过熏衣草的紫色

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Posted: 2008-03-10 12:11:10 Post subject:

七个字：这下偶真糊涂了

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Posted: 2008-03-10 12:26:34 Post subject: 八个字：八个字乘以八个字。

八个字乘以八个字就是六十四个字。关于这六十四个字，还要从一个字说起。但是为了六十四个字的限制，我们只好由四个字的地方开始说明，前项暂时省略。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-10 12:29:23 Post subject:

九个字：这下偶越来越糊涂了

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Posted: 2008-03-10 12:36:08 Post subject: 十个字：你不把我累死誓不罢休！

死比晕还久～ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-10 12:42:53 Post subject:

11个字: 你不把我糊涂晕死不罢休

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Posted: 2008-03-10 12:48:11 Post subject:

十二个字：斑竹贴主悠子有刷屏的嫌疑。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-10 14:20:54 Post subject: Re: 十二个字：斑竹贴主悠子有刷屏的嫌疑。

口口口口口（一下省略200字）你们不好好改诗~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-10 14:25:33 Post subject: 哪有你们？只有悠子！

红袖添乱 wrote:

口口口口口（一下省略200字）

你们不好好改诗~~~

我没有喔！我是主持正义～
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Posted: 2008-03-10 15:20:50 Post subject:

穿过。。。。。。带着春的芬芳。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-03-10 22:17:41 Post subject:

轻描一份缘深，淡写几缕意长 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-03-11 03:36:12 Post subject: 穿过熏衣草的紫色

穿过熏衣草的紫色我看见你的目光漫过轻寒一如你的淡雅和忧伤如何才能，解译你的眉语在每一个精美的结络之下都是此第开花的诺言和守望其实，我们不必去赶歌声的约会或者阳光的现场于万株之间在万人之上只要你认出我今生的模样穿过熏衣草的紫色我看见你的目光还有你苏醒的笑意和临别时你放入我手心的思量 _________________ 人称呆嫂

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Posted: 2008-03-11 05:41:04 Post subject:

呆哥家滴呆嫂很俏哎喜欢～ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-11 07:13:49 Post subject:

13个字：呆哥家滴呆嫂很俏哎(ZT)诗也好看!

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Posted: 2008-03-11 07:24:02 Post subject:

1234，第二段是呆哥操刀的。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-11 07:38:29 Post subject:

呆嫂的也好看，好像一个人。。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-11 07:40:17 Post subject:

你猜得出他是谁，俺服你！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-11 07:43:03 Post subject: Re: 你猜得出他是谁，俺服你！

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

你猜得出他是谁，俺服你！

嗯，不敢说，，，，你不信???
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Posted: 2008-03-11 07:53:11 Post subject: Re: 1234，第二段是呆哥操刀的。

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

1234，第二段是呆哥操刀的。

呆哥操刀，割掉一片熏衣草~
我看是呆嫂替呆哥写呢~~

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Posted: 2008-03-11 07:54:53 Post subject:

我也猜她呢，功底很深的

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Posted: 2008-03-11 07:56:47 Post subject:

呆嫂写成，直觉着不满意，第二段让呆哥给修改滴。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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