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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 05:12:56    Post subject: 出发前——写意白水靓影 Reply with quote

出发前——写意白水靓影
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白的是光线---面部、手和胸前
水藏于眼瞳---不息的波涛似近似远
你把自己最舒展的向往摆进车厢
好惬意的了---出发前最美的打算

2008-3-5/上午于文化村
(白水的靓影见《北美枫》总第四期封里)
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 16:32:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师的诗歌, 收藏了.

只是我不明白照片是怎么回事 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 18:15:32    Post subject: Re: 谢谢老师的诗歌, 收藏了.只是我不明白照片... Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
谢谢老师的诗歌, 收藏了.

只是我不明白照片是怎么回事 Embarassed


有呀
在封2,有8个获奖者的照片
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 01:13:35    Post subject: Re: 谢谢老师的诗歌, 收藏了.只是我不明白照片... Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
谢谢老师的诗歌, 收藏了.

只是我不明白照片是怎么回事 Embarassed


风风火火的激情,原先总疑你是个小伙子,这回在第四期看到了,于是就写了一首现代藏头诗赠你!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-06 01:15:48    Post subject: Re: 谢谢老师的诗歌, 收藏了.只是我不明白照片... Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
谢谢老师的诗歌, 收藏了.

只是我不明白照片是怎么回事 Embarassed


有呀
在封2,有8个获奖者的照片


问好岛主!白水没看到她的照片呀!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-07 18:42:47    Post subject: Re: 谢谢老师的诗歌, 收藏了.只是我不明白照片... Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
谢谢老师的诗歌, 收藏了.

只是我不明白照片是怎么回事 Embarassed


风风火火的激情,原先总疑你是个小伙子,这回在第四期看到了,于是就写了一首现代藏头诗赠你!


谢谢山城子老师, 我一直以为灵魂是无性别的,看来往后要注意点了 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 06:44:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

灵魂是无性别的——白水说得太好了!
其实读诗,读的就是灵魂!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 14:34:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

水藏于眼瞳---不息的波涛似近似远
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 23:33:32    Post subject: Re: 水藏于眼瞳---不息的波涛似近似远 Reply with quote

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水藏于眼瞳---不息的波涛似近似远


问好海军!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-10 15:26:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

看见照片我也写首.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-13 05:38:10    Post subject: Re: 看见照片我也写首. Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
看见照片我也写首.



福治:写毕告诉我一声好吗?——以便学习!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-17 04:38:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

水藏于眼瞳---不息的波涛似近似远
想看看......
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PostPosted: 2008-04-17 06:44:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

我想看水水DSG照片。谁贴一张吧~~
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PostPosted: 2008-04-17 20:12:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
我想看水水DSG照片。谁贴一张吧~~


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PostPosted: 2008-04-17 21:37:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

藏头诗歌.
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PostPosted: 2008-04-17 21:38:44    Post subject: Re: 看见照片我也写首. Reply with quote

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赵福治 wrote:
看见照片我也写首.



福治:写毕告诉我一声好吗?——以便学习!


好的兄.
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 01:03:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

钓月 wrote:
水藏于眼瞳---不息的波涛似近似远
想看看......


还是从我的文字中展开想象吧!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 01:05:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
我想看水水DSG照片。谁贴一张吧~~


可惜山城子不会贴画!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 01:06:34    Post subject: Re: 看见照片我也写首. Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
山城子 wrote:
赵福治 wrote:
看见照片我也写首.



福治:写毕告诉我一声好吗?——以便学习!


好的兄.


也写个藏头的吗?
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 01:20:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

祝福!!!!!
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