荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-10 00:49:44 Post subject: |
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第一节很美。 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-10 08:42:48 Post subject: |
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修订了一下 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-03-10 15:25:25 Post subject: |
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读短诗,总象是在捞金子。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-10 16:08:32 Post subject: Re: 读短诗,总象是在捞金子。 |
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偶是想往里洒点什么发光的东西~随便什么发光的.不容易 |
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