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《活死人》
平和玉
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PostPosted: 2007-01-12 01:24:04    Post subject: 《活死人》 Reply with quote

在光下死
在暗处活
2006年站着死
2007年趴着活

出来活动需要
戴上沉重的面具
人前摆个漂亮的PS
在单纯面前表演“单纯”
在善良面前演绎“善良”
在大师面前更象“大师”
在女人面前更象“男人”

2006年站着死
2007年趴着腐烂
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-01-12 03:02:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

新意不足。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-12 03:07:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢杯中冲浪版主,我修改一下看,初学,请多指教!
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PostPosted: 2007-01-12 03:18:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

至少,作者在探寻真理。这本身,已超越了诗所能凝聚的技巧。
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平和玉
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PostPosted: 2007-01-12 06:00:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

兄过奖了,还在学习中!
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PostPosted: 2007-01-17 08:39:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好妹妹~ Very Happy
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