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艺术的尾巴

荣宪
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Joined: 23 Jun 2006
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Location: 四川
荣宪Collection

Posted: 2008-03-08 03:27:51 Post subject: 艺术的尾巴

艺术的尾巴四川荣宪没有更好的语言来承载石头里开花的一部分金子很耀眼那只是阳光的外衣河流还没开始说话时云彩就来过这里但是她觉得自己很丑是因为她还穿着华丽的外衣河流淌着四季的变化淌着干涸前的欢乐淌在心里甜着 20080305 _________________ http://rxbk.bokee.com/ 感谢尘土感谢盐

金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2008-03-08 03:42:33 Post subject:

有意思：） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-03-08 16:17:07 Post subject:

表现形象,可圆润些.

明天朔
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Posted: 2008-03-08 18:11:04 Post subject:

意象层层深入。

荣宪
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Posted: 2008-03-10 06:24:21 Post subject: 谢!

谢谢几位诗友点评!!! _________________ http://rxbk.bokee.com/ 感谢尘土感谢盐

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