游向高原的鱼
秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007
Posts: 382
游向高原的鱼Collection |
 Posted: 2008-03-07 21:32:47 Post subject: 七绝 和雪薇《初春》 |
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寒意凄迷遁远峰，熏风乍歇又疑冬。
行人在雨桃红伴，故旧寻来失影踪。
下面是雪薇的原作
雨洗亭皋瘦雪峰，东风拂柳扫残冬。
轻雷隐约云天外，几点桃红访旧踪。
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2008-03-07 23:36:35 Post subject: |
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| 意幽韵浓。问好老友！ |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
黄洋界Collection |
| Posted: 2008-03-08 07:55:50 Post subject: |
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和诗的一二句形象而生动地写出了乍暖还寒的情景。感同身受。
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
| Posted: 2008-03-10 10:11:13 Post subject: |
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寻来故旧影离离，潾涌心潮步不移。
我拾桃红又相思，送别寒意送凄迷。 思,仄声.
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是有缘
秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008
Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
| Posted: 2008-03-10 15:12:07 Post subject: |
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一起学习。
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