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Posted: 2008-03-06 08:35:38 Post subject: 四季歌

1 细雨蒙烟初醒的温润，翠绿着我的眼睛从寂廖回到鲜明梦，溅起一串飞红 2 荷风送香星与蛙的倾谈，深邃着夜的色泽雷雨洗去浮躁和尘埃希望，和空气一样透明 3 雁终于要飞去红似火绿如蓝，调和着菊瘦的伤感萧瑟隔着天与地的距离忧伤，独奏月的丰满 4 天寒色苍云的凝固，封存着日月的根须没有冻结的心声依旧梦幻，纷飞雪的轻柔 03/06/2008 03/10/2008 悠子临摹

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Posted: 2008-03-06 09:38:03 Post subject:

夏夜的聆听是很奇妙的一件事，试过了吗？ _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-03-06 09:40:27 Post subject:

不如骑虫儿好玩~，你骑过了吗

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Posted: 2008-03-06 09:44:02 Post subject: Re: 不如骑虫儿好玩~，你骑过了吗

悠子 wrote:

不如骑虫儿好玩~，你骑过了吗

儿时骑过。灵魂越来越重，骑不动它们了。
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Posted: 2008-03-06 09:46:48 Post subject:

你的灵魂越来越重，没有关系啦。我的耳朵渐渐失聪，就不好玩啦。

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Posted: 2008-03-06 09:51:15 Post subject: Re: 你的灵魂越来越重，没有关系啦。我的耳朵...

悠子 wrote:

你的灵魂越来越重，没有关系啦。
我的耳朵渐渐失聪，就不好玩啦。

一定要用耳朵听吗？
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Posted: 2008-03-06 09:58:15 Post subject:

用耳朵的灵魂，就是不知道重的掉到那里去了

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Posted: 2008-03-06 17:01:53 Post subject:

瞧这俩对话，像七老八十了！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-06 17:17:34 Post subject:

啊，你怎么知道偶的年龄啦??

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Posted: 2008-03-07 09:20:26 Post subject: 我用放大镜数你脸上的皱纹！哈哈～

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啊，你怎么知道偶的年龄啦??

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Posted: 2008-03-07 12:42:25 Post subject: Re: 我用放大镜数你脸上的皱纹！哈哈～

需要望远镜加显微镜~

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Posted: 2008-03-07 16:37:39 Post subject:

第一段很亮。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-08 05:39:46 Post subject: 我昨天用鱼尾纹夹死一只笨蚊子！

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需要望远镜加显微镜~

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Posted: 2008-03-08 05:45:58 Post subject:

挖，机器上能学临摹么？手痒痒了：） _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-08 17:23:33 Post subject:

我也喜欢第一节 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-03-09 09:48:33 Post subject:

谢茉儿，合心。后面的是马虎了。。。

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Posted: 2008-03-09 09:50:06 Post subject: Re: 挖，机器上能学临摹么？手痒痒了：）

点点儿 wrote:

挖，机器上能学临摹么？手痒痒了：）

手画的。太久不画，从头开始

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Posted: 2008-03-09 11:36:42 Post subject: 哇～这才看到。是你自己画的！

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点点儿 wrote:

挖，机器上能学临摹么？手痒痒了：）

手画的。太久不画，从头开始

才想说悠子这次怎么挑了一幅那么搭称的图档哪！原来是自己画的，太厉害啦！图文并美～
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Posted: 2008-03-09 13:43:59 Post subject: Re: 哇～这才看到。是你自己画的！

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才想说悠子这次怎么挑了一幅那么搭称的图档哪！原来是自己画的，太厉害啦！图文并美～

这话我怎么听了有些别扭, 好像在说"才想说悠子这次怎么挑了一幅那么不搭称的图档哪"

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Posted: 2008-03-09 13:55:15 Post subject: 怎可用悠子之心度诗盗之腹！

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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

才想说悠子这次怎么挑了一幅那么搭称的图档哪！原来是自己画的，太厉害啦！图文并美～

这话我怎么听了有些别扭, 好像在说"才想说悠子这次怎么挑了一幅那么不搭称的图档哪"

您看那杯子画的真是栩栩如生，那杯垫的紫色尤其色彩迷人。
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