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PostPosted: 2008-03-01 08:45:28    Post subject: (独领风骚-图像) 梅雪香、呵手试梅妆 Reply with quote

用这张图片曾添了一首<梅雪香>给爱爱,太喜欢就再来添一首。
也喜欢的朋友也请来试试吧,很美的图片!

(一)

梅雪香

梅总逊雪三分白,
雪却输梅一簇香。
为你,
化雪?
化梅?
我想了又想!

月光,
怜爱着我痴痴的模样,
让思念迸发出的声声叹息,
跌进月色,
散入梦里。

梦里,
我飘成一枚六角的花瓣。
踏你,
傲骨的梅香而来。
相拥着,
解读心有灵犀的秘语。

月光,
被我们吻醉!
悄悄的睡去。
我的耳语,
被晨光一一道破,
羞红了你,
迷人的脸蛋儿!

(二)

呵手试梅妆

1、

雪花,翩然飘临
一个脉脉的拥抱
梅的枝桠,递来一束
冬韵的芳香

风,轻轻一吹
那醉人的香
就诗意的迷漫开来
轻逸而无尘

2、

舍不得关上窗
也舍不得心篱内
默默的守望

对镜,描眉
却怎么也勾勒不出
你诗中的模样

人,比黄花瘦
苍白无力的唇
说不清楚为什么

3、

睡了吧!
镜子虽无灵
却会一直守着你

梦,还是最初的颜色
大朵大朵的
从窗口飘出,羞涩的
站在梅头张望

爱,乘着梦的翅膀
滑进你的梦乡
等你为我
呵手试梅妆


雪语-诗盗、珠砂-爱爱、
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PostPosted: 2008-03-01 08:48:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

嗯, 图片由班长贴吧。这儿的程序对我有意见。不听我话。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-01 21:04:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵手试梅妆, 这一句吸引了我。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-02 11:07:50    Post subject: Re: 嗯, 图片由班长贴吧。这儿的程序对我有意见... Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
嗯, 图片由班长贴吧。这儿的程序对我有意见。不听我话。


这个系统喜欢摇滚乐,你对着他唱情歌也可以接受!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-02 14:48:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

茉儿好作,诗写得越来越有味了。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 07:23:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

好喜欢这呵手试梅妆,

太有意境了~~

茉儿的诗越来越轻灵了, 爱死~~~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 08:34:00    Post subject: Re: 呵手试梅妆, 这一句吸引了我。 Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
呵手试梅妆, 这一句吸引了我。


嗯,谢谢博弈兄赏读,你来接一首啊。看看吸引出了啥。haha.......
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 08:34:57    Post subject: Re: 嗯, 图片由班长贴吧。这儿的程序对我有意见... Reply with quote

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苏茉儿 wrote:
嗯, 图片由班长贴吧。这儿的程序对我有意见。不听我话。


这个系统喜欢摇滚乐,你对着他唱情歌也可以接受!


你唱啊!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 08:35:53    Post subject: Re: 茉儿好作,诗写得越来越有味了。 Reply with quote

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茉儿好作,诗写得越来越有味了。


谢谢有缘兄夸奖。也接呀。茉儿好孤独啊。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 08:37:00    Post subject: Re: 好喜欢这呵手试梅妆,太有意境了~~茉儿的... Reply with quote

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好喜欢这呵手试梅妆,

太有意境了~~

茉儿的诗越来越轻灵了, 爱死~~~


你来啦。用你得方式爱我吧。你知道的。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 10:18:10    Post subject: Re: 嗯, 图片由班长贴吧。这儿的程序对我有意见... Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
嗯, 图片由班长贴吧。这儿的程序对我有意见。不听我话。


这个系统喜欢摇滚乐,你对着他唱情歌也可以接受!


你唱啊!


我上次唱了!它把俺的贴子吃了!什么世界?
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 19:06:49    Post subject: 跟茉儿的梅香~~ Reply with quote

寒潮
冻红了
俏丽的梅妆
我在冰雪的枝头
悄然绽放
裹着醉人的暗香
深深的呼吸
把今夜的我
烙成
一粒红色的珠桬
嵌入洁白的梦乡
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 21:10:48    Post subject: 疯了, 疯了, 继续折腾呵手拭梅妆 Reply with quote

依着一弯明月小窗
笛声悠扬
谁在梦中苦苦盼望
盼你
呵手试梅妆

窗外的月光如水清凉
梅边的玉人
弥漫着诗意的暗香
等你
举手间的温柔
划过她娇羞的脸庞

千万不要醒来啊
还舍不得
那掌心的温度
和爱怜的想象
梅林
寂寞的
珠砂
开满枝桠
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 08:39:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

嗯,爱姐姐辛苦了,送一杯茉莉花茶!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 16:40:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

好漂亮~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 18:22:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

听说姑娘们烹雪煮诗,当嫂子的想进来问个好.
让进吗?
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 18:58:45    Post subject: 让进?让进就再说几句. Reply with quote

苏茉儿的轻盈灵动,层次丰富,有喜有嗔,有自信也有忐忑,青涩而又诱人.最喜欢这段.
"梦,还是最初的味道
大朵大朵的
从窗口飘出,羞涩的
站在梅头张望"

爱爱的珠砂情绪更饱满明亮,善于引人入胜,于结句处更是做天籁之声,回味无穷.
"
深深的呼吸
把今夜
烙成
眉心间
一颗
暗红色的珠砂"

诗盗喜裸评的我基本没看懂,等会问问呆哥有甚想法没有.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 19:38:33    Post subject: Re: 听说姑娘们烹雪煮诗,当嫂子的想进来问个好.... Reply with quote

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听说姑娘们烹雪煮诗,当嫂子的想进来问个好.
让进吗?


哈哈~问好呆哥、呆嫂!欢迎您来呀~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 08:33:15    Post subject: Re: 好漂亮~ Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
好漂亮~


谢谢悠子光顾!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 08:35:12    Post subject: Re: 让进?让进就再说几句. Reply with quote

呆哥的女人 wrote:
苏茉儿的轻盈灵动,层次丰富,有喜有嗔,有自信也有忐忑,青涩而又诱人.最喜欢这段.
...


嗯,也问您好。
坐,请坐,请上坐!
茶,上茶,上好茶!
谢谢您点评。还有常来玩。
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