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鹧鸪天—踏青

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-03 21:58:33 Post subject: 鹧鸪天—踏青

雀闹清晨对小窗，消溶玉蕊理梅装。飘摇嫩柳箫伤曲，斗艳娇花墨绘章。诗内敛，画张扬。闲庭信步叹夕阳。殷勤运笔书幽句，又得心音分寸行？

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Posted: 2008-03-03 23:19:54 Post subject:

欣赏、问好！ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-03-04 07:40:39 Post subject:

殷勤运笔书幽句，又得心音分寸行天道酬勤，定获丰收，问好莹雪。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-03-04 15:01:33 Post subject:

好作，学习。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-03-04 15:52:02 Post subject: Re: 欣赏、问好！

郑达夫 wrote:

欣赏、问好！

谢谢，您好！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-04 15:53:20 Post subject: Re: 殷勤运笔书幽句，又得心音分寸行天道酬勤...

黄洋界 wrote:

殷勤运笔书幽句，又得心音分寸行

天道酬勤，定获丰收，问好莹雪。

谢谢您的鼓励！问好！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-04 15:54:04 Post subject: Re: 好作，学习。

是有缘 wrote:

好作，学习。

谢谢点评！

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Posted: 2008-03-04 16:21:03 Post subject:

很美！莹雪。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-04 17:25:10 Post subject:

殷勤运笔，闲庭信步。好潇洒！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-04 18:58:54 Post subject: Re: 很美！莹雪。。。

苏茉儿 wrote:

很美！莹雪。。。

谢谢！茉儿。。。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-04 19:00:43 Post subject: Re: 殷勤运笔，闲庭信步。好潇洒！

qinghongh wrote:

殷勤运笔，闲庭信步。
好潇洒！

偶书所思，随意练笔。谢谢GG！

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Posted: 2008-03-05 03:02:43 Post subject:

来看看妹妹,有进步哦呵呵! _________________ 我是沙漠狐姬,今世,就是为了寻找千年前救过我的落魄书生而来。 http://xiaoshexi.blogcn.com/index.shtml 我的博客

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Posted: 2008-03-05 15:44:37 Post subject:

呵呵，欢迎光临！

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Posted: 2008-03-06 01:18:39 Post subject:

雀闹清晨对小窗，消溶玉蕊理梅装。莹雪，我喜欢这两句。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-06 15:43:03 Post subject: Re: 雀闹清晨对小窗，消溶玉蕊理梅装。莹雪，...

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

雀闹清晨对小窗，消溶玉蕊理梅装。
莹雪，我喜欢这两句。

谢谢欣赏！

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