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黄瓜出嫁
雨木
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Joined: 22 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 09:53:09    Post subject: 黄瓜出嫁 Reply with quote

树挂披彩霞流下口水
眼巴巴望着翠绿黄瓜
昨日刚饮瑞雪酒
今早喜送汝出嫁
许配谁家
身穿轻纱头戴花

露珠儿相伴一夜未睡
藤蔓哥精心酿制香茶
青果妹慕眼牵手
耳边再叙悄悄话
姐是福娃
新娘靓醉温哥华

弯弯村路走过“WTO”
解毒消肿真情德无价
千里婵娟润和谐
留取丹心誉天涯
何不潇洒
读懂了酸甜咸辣
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詩盜喜裸評
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Joined: 15 May 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 10:23:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

这黄瓜!还是嫁给黄瓜吧?应该~
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nobody
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PostPosted: 2008-03-15 22:10:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜庆。问好。
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-03-15 22:59:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

朗朗上口,很喜庆~问好新朋友!
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雨木
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Joined: 22 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-05-04 08:39:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位的提读,欢迎批评指正。问好并远握!
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