白水
大学士
zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-10-02
tièzǐ: 14102
láizì: TORONTO
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 fābiǎoyú: 2006-12-24 20:36:26 fābiǎozhùtí: The moon of 17th night |
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The moon of 17th night
In my mind
the moonlight is just like water
you said:" the meaning is too old,
like a story from three thousand years ago "
What do you think about the moon?
is it a stone or an apple?
taste the moonlight by my tongue
the relish is cool and so sweet
The moon has lost a corner
on the 17th night
I found,
a scar of your tooth is on her face
<十七的月亮>
在我的脑海
月光似水
你说: “喻意太老
老的好象三千年前的故事”
那么, 你心中的月亮
是一块石头或是一只苹果?
我伸出舌尖舔噬月光
甜蜜, 冰凉
十七的月亮缺了
我看见, 你的齿痕
在她脸上 |
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kino
秀才
zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-12-23
tièzǐ: 411
láizì: beijing
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| fābiǎoyú: 2006-12-25 03:58:30 fābiǎozhùtí: 拜读 |
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good poems.
the english could be better. |
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白水
大学士
zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-10-02
tièzǐ: 14102
láizì: TORONTO
白水běiměifēngwénjí |
| fābiǎoyú: 2006-12-25 13:12:39 fābiǎozhùtí: Re: 拜读 |
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good poems.
the english could be better. |
THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS, I WOULD LIKE TO GET SOME SUGGESTIONS FROM YOU. MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR. |
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kokho
进士出身
zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-11-30
tièzǐ: 2642
láizì: Singapore
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-01-10 03:31:11 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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Thank you for sharing ...
 
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kokho
进士出身
zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-11-30
tièzǐ: 2642
láizì: Singapore
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-01-10 10:54:24 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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agree with Kino
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