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我的名字里有雪

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Posted: 2008-03-03 04:53:06 Post subject: 我的名字里有雪

我的名字里有雪我在炎热的盛夏降生我的名字里有雪父母说，雪天会很冷很冷自己要早早学会，知道冷暖我很爱哭暖时一个人坐在有席子的炕边看窗外的小鸡们嬉耍觅食冷时就跪到窗台前用食指，用鼻子，用嘴巴与玻璃上的冰花漫触轻语看它们融化露出缤纷的天那些美丽的星，冰莹厚实坚硬可它能在我轻轻的触摸中化成水滴滋润心田也习惯了迎着西北风出门我学会了不惧严寒我出生在炎热的夏天可我的名字里有雪 03／03／2008 晨 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-03 05:16:20 Post subject:

原来正是：炎热夏天里出生的爱哭雪！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-03 05:19:07 Post subject:

耶～～～偶就姓爱啦～～～ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-03 05:27:48 Post subject: 不雅！藏起来～

晕～还好不是姓那个烧焦的焦！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-03 05:43:16 Post subject:

哈哈哈哈哈～～～～～哈！那个留给你。。。。哈 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-03 07:25:32 Post subject: Re: 耶～～～偶就姓爱啦～～～

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耶～～～偶就姓爱啦～～～

好好好~~跟我一家~~~~

亲亲点点儿~~

这首诗要请西门来帮忙, 把雪吹走~~~~

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Posted: 2008-03-03 07:33:21 Post subject:

哈，估计他烧也烧不完了该～～～抱抱两堆雪 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-03 08:39:23 Post subject:

怪不得怎么都融化不了你得心那。原来如彼啊！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-03 09:54:40 Post subject: 还真没见过姓爱的！姓那个啥的我认识一位！

晕死～ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-03 09:59:36 Post subject: Re: 怪不得怎么都融化不了你得心那。原来如彼啊...

苏茉儿 wrote:

怪不得怎么都融化不了你得心那。原来如彼啊！

化完了，结成了冰

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Posted: 2008-03-03 10:03:38 Post subject: 玩玩看能不能刷一整个版面！哈～

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苏茉儿 wrote:

怪不得怎么都融化不了你得心那。原来如彼啊！

化完了，结成了冰

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Posted: 2008-03-03 10:08:00 Post subject:

噢，你两都结冰，真问题。装筐仍进火炉，蒸发。哈哈。。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-03 10:10:28 Post subject: 哈哈～你能整出个筐来！俺拜你做师傅～

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噢，你两都结冰，真问题。装筐仍进火炉，蒸发。哈哈。。。。

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Posted: 2008-03-03 16:07:00 Post subject:

呵看尽了世态的炎凉尝尽了人间的冷暖心铁了，也冷啦。得用诗温一温 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-03-14 12:59:04 Post subject:

嗯？清凉怀抱？

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Posted: 2008-03-14 14:01:28 Post subject: 嗯，清凉怀抱～跟诗一样拽～

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嗯？清凉怀抱？

对呀，独一无二～

下边那个帖子留筐示众啦，恕不填坑儿～ Very Happy

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