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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 04:19:08    Post subject: 雨人 Reply with quote

雨人

雨打湿邻家的庭院
弄花我新刷的墙坛
片片花斑
似以释然

你在远处顾盼
我分辨不出你的脸
招招手, 走的更远

雨很大 犹豫间
怯怯 走向前
张开臂 靠近你身边
仰起脸 护
雨滴打湿的,你瘦削的肩

雨停的时候 发现
我孤独站在
空旷的, 庭院间

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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 04:25:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

让雨给打傻啦?
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 05:06:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

恩哪~~~斑猪早 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 05:12:37    Post subject: 下次要淋雨记得找我,我给你撑伞。 Reply with quote

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恩哪~~~斑猪早 Very Happy

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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 05:20:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

8准发空贴! Shocked
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 05:32:19    Post subject: 运作机制有些奇怪,又说不出那里出了问题! Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 05:34:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Re: 8准发空贴! Shocked
测试一下啥是引述楼上的功能!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 05:35:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

Re Re:8准发空贴!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 05:37:46    Post subject: Re: 测试一下啥是引述楼上的功能! Reply with quote

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Re: 8准发空贴! Shocked
测试一下啥是引述楼上的功能!



无用功~~~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 05:38:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

你把我的帖子删了, 看看帖子数是不是减少了?嘻
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 05:40:32    Post subject: Re: 你把我的帖子删了, 看看帖子数是不是减少了... Reply with quote

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偶是说删跟贴啊, 别把主贴删了,偶好不容易诌一篇, 哈
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 07:29:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

点点DD你们玩什么哪~~~还不赶紧撑把伞去????
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 07:30:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈, 爱爱好```雨很大 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 08:55:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

其实他永远不懂你的心
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 09:40:56    Post subject: 好像翻了页面就看不到回贴标题! Reply with quote

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你把我的帖子删了, 看看帖子数是不是减少了?嘻



偶是说删跟贴啊, 别把主贴删了,偶好不容易诌一篇, 哈

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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 09:50:45    Post subject: Re: 好像翻了页面就看不到回贴标题! Reply with quote

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点点儿 wrote:
点点儿 wrote:
你把我的帖子删了, 看看帖子数是不是减少了?嘻



偶是说删跟贴啊, 别把主贴删了,偶好不容易诌一篇, 哈


切!反对空贴。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 09:59:00    Post subject: 这与城里一样形式!不算空贴吧!应该加个选项,或是整成两栏! Reply with quote

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