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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 08:15:54    Post subject: 深情 Reply with quote

深情

凛冽的风
呼啸
穿透
墓碑的寂寥

佝偻的老人
伸出温暖的手
轻轻婆娑墓碑的肩头
呜咽着
沉甸甸的思念

风声越来越急
单薄的老人
干咳
颤抖
天,真的好冷

“老伴!
我又来看你
不要把我挂念
政府给的补贴
一个人的日子刚刚好
还有,你的帽子和奖章
我都有好好珍藏
你好好休息,下次我再来看你!”

干柴一样的手
紧握着送给老伴的鲜花
远远的站立成
寒风里的根雕
不肯
远走
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 08:27:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

哇~抱歉!你的贴子让我给玩不见了!新功能我还没搞懂?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 08:29:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈,你你你,我也看见了。你,哈,双倍陪我。我好辛苦才,,,
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 08:37:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
哈,你你你,我也看见了。你,哈,双倍陪我。我好辛苦才,,,


赔哪!二话不说,说赔就赔。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 17:55:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

开玩笑啊,是不是?

希望换图片, 或者改诗。 或者撤消置顶。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 18:26:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗盗,把这个贴子删了吧。谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 18:36:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

删贴干嘛?改改就那么麻烦么?既然写了, 就真情到底呗。 。。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 18:41:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

哇~咋办?换张图如何?大家帮忙找找?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 18:43:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

改诗吧, 不是冲着这张图来滴么````

唉```走啦。 你们玩儿好。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 18:48:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

点点儿,我想说,这照片之前我的确没仔细看它的"故事",
后来看了林曦兄的介绍才知道的。可那时已经贴了。来不及。

不知者应该是无罪的吧。也的确没假情假意。假的也写不来。
不过知道有误,就有权利选择删除。

所以,请诗盗帮我删除,有时间我会再添一首新的。再次感谢!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 19:56:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

图档拉掉就好了呗!文字是好的,毋需牵连一起。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-29 05:29:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗盗说的对,总有办法解决,不必让辛劳付诸东流。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-29 15:13:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

嗯,诗盗!嗯,有缘兄!
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