notcoffee
童生
Joined: 27 Feb 2008
Posts: 53
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 Posted: 2008-02-27 21:35:26 Post subject: 如梦令 |
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月入金樽不散
花惹相思一瓣
渐忘夜阑珊
秋透青衣微颤
稍慢
稍慢
未解今生牵绊 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-02-28 07:07:24 Post subject: |
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虽属小令,韵味亦长,欣赏.
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2008-02-29 19:39:26 Post subject: |
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| 月入樽，花惹思，夜阑，秋凉......所有这些渲染，一句“未解今生牵绊”，圆满收住。好诗~ |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2008-02-29 23:30:22 Post subject: |
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| 韵浓意深。 |
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