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《泥土,我以一粒种子的名义爱你》
木易沉香
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PostPosted: 2008-02-27 01:55:57    Post subject: 《泥土,我以一粒种子的名义爱你》 Reply with quote

《泥土,我以一粒种子的名义爱你》

1.
现在春天正向我靠近
我们的山冈,树木,美丽的桃花林
哦,我只是想说在这之前
我曾经作为一棵草
一粒来自这棵草的种子
怀着对一场大雪的渴望
在你身边被风吹落

2.
没有跌宕起伏的故事
我的到来丝毫不显得仓促
就象葵花上那些向南的房屋
以及阳光下翘首北望的树木
安静地偎在你的怀抱
任雨露和春色不停地奔跑

3.
春雷揣着阵痛在天边复活
麦芒唤醒沉睡的眼睛
如果我的肋骨不能歪曲
我的辉煌,我的暗淡
没有落日的悲壮大气
马匹踏碎长空归途,亲爱的
我用什么衬托你的威仪

4.
最终,我还是决定要走出去
自己和自己一起
自己与自己相遇
身体赤裸,不可掖藏哀伤
我要一步一步,踩着落地的叹息
去看我们亲手栽植的星子,影子
天堂。天堂里流淌的金黄和深绿

5.
这里有我们的路与路程
有属于我们的风声
有我的,你的脚步
时光已老,你的墓碑始终这样坐着
一动不动如疲惫的灯火
而我是那个朗诵者,手持孤独
在清醒的天空下,亲爱的
我只有再次低下头来,重回我的泥土
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-02-27 03:35:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

而我是那个朗诵者,手持孤独
在清醒的天空下,亲爱的
我只有再次低下头来,重回我的泥土....深情的咏叹.
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PostPosted: 2008-02-27 04:36:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-27 04:41:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

的确不错!!!!问好!!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-02-27 08:57:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

我要一步一步,踩着落地的叹息
去看我们亲手栽植的星子,影子
天堂。天堂里流淌的金黄和深绿


优美华丽的句子,问好沉香~
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顾小花
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PostPosted: 2008-02-27 21:00:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

情深意满。问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 07:20:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
而我是那个朗诵者,手持孤独
...

问候福治兄 一向可好:)
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 07:21:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
不错。

感谢鼓励 问好:)
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 07:22:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
的确不错!!!!问好!!!

多谢 请多批评:)
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 07:23:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
我要一步一步,踩着落地的叹息
...
问好明月 多批为盼:)
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 07:25:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

顾小花 wrote:
情深意满。问好!

谢谢点评 请多批评 问好你:)
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PostPosted: 2008-04-07 23:43:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

提一下~
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