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意境 (四首)
朱煜国
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PostPosted: 2008-02-26 02:18:32    Post subject: 意境 (四首) Reply with quote

意境
(外三首)
☆ 聿 果

站在大自然的室内
我朝向
大自然的窗口
张望

窗口之上
是阴暗而广阔的天空
天空
有些压抑变形
一轮明月悬如浮萍
几只鹰呈品字状在周边飞行

窗框两旁
零星散布几簇树木
枝条攒动
已不见了花朵和叶子

窗口下
绿油油的麦地往两边拉直
苗儿还未长起
麦地里
一位婀娜的黑衣女郎头戴纱巾
几枝树丫从她头上斜伸而出
女郎以背影对我
和我一样
对着窗口凝望

窗外
兀现一座城堡或教堂
我分辨不清
依稀可见
许多乌鸦在房顶鸣叫盘旋


风 景

走入你的视线

依然是活青青的生命
顶尖拼命拔高疯长
有时射电或摇荡
我猜不出其中的寓意
只是朦胧模糊了双眼
意识的清醒
排扰不了夜睡的梦境
黎明时
我把头伸出窗外
掣响一串风铃


心 韵

小雨纷纷飘着
打湿了树上的绿叶
柔柔的风儿吹过来
絮絮呢喃
春的相思

忽而
一颗硕大的泪珠
自眼眶
渗 出


风 夜

划燃一根火柴
黑夜如此漫长
凄厉的风吹过来
火苗来回晃荡
这时,窗外的一片杂草有些荒唐
室内却有一只蚊子嘤嘤飞翔
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金金
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PostPosted: 2008-02-26 02:28:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

提起来读。问好。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-26 05:46:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Very Happy 很抒情的描写,不错。
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