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盛开的脚印

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2008-02-13 21:29:00 Post subject: 盛开的脚印

盛开的脚印是的，你和我同样拒绝不了声音，如同拒绝不了饥饿拒绝不了爱情，拒绝不了那些祝福的话语总有一些声音是不绝于耳的也总有一句话铭刻于心节日中有些喧闹的阳光有些沾满欢笑麻木了的表情还有些你不能说的，也不会说的感情光景之中　　溜走了一些幻觉还是梦境　　肃穆　一年一度的希望给了灵魂或是寄给了漂泊的心灵赤脚的奔跑还是端坐的悠然失真在父母温暖的怀抱里路上　一地脚印　　恍然忙碌 [/b] _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-02-14 02:42:26 Post subject:

赤脚的奔跑还是端坐的悠然失真在父母温暖的怀抱里但愿２００８年不再忙碌，阿琼新春好！

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-02-14 03:00:32 Post subject:

路上　一地脚印 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

苏茉儿
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Posted: 2008-02-14 09:42:48 Post subject:

也问阿依琼裙好！结尾去掉路上，可好！总觉得这两字有些刻意。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

迪拜
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Posted: 2008-02-14 18:02:07 Post subject:

不错的诗歌节日问好！

韩少君
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Posted: 2008-02-14 20:08:32 Post subject:

又见阿依问好琼裙! 是的，你和我同样拒绝不了声音，如同拒绝不了饥饿拒绝不了爱情，拒绝不了那些祝福的话语我主要是拒绝不了自己的存在! 我存在,故我无法拒绝! 肃穆　一年一度的希望给了灵魂或是寄给了漂泊的心灵痛感,同感,统感------ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2008-02-20 21:06:25 Post subject:

问好月月，杯中冲浪，沫儿，迪拜和少君！沫儿，你说去掉“路上”，我去掉来阅读感觉上下是否有点不连贯？？谢沫儿的用心，也谢朋友们的点评！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-02-21 19:03:41 Post subject:

我也觉得“路上”留着好！问好！

山城子
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Posted: 2008-02-22 09:16:12 Post subject:

喜欢！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

上城
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Posted: 2008-02-22 20:59:47 Post subject:

有远行的渴望 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

白水
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Posted: 2008-02-24 07:34:34 Post subject:

大气, 激情

上城
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Posted: 2008-02-25 20:10:21 Post subject:

我写过一句:"路上,不忘给自己加件衣裳",送给你吧 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

金金
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Posted: 2008-02-26 02:03:08 Post subject:

真。很真。问好你，祝你美丽”） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

顾小花
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Joined: 23 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2008-02-27 21:10:39 Post subject:

谁不是在为生活奔波啊。问好！ _________________ 春风吹又生:http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1285636777

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