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秋日随想
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PostPosted: 2007-01-08 22:42:21    Post subject: 秋日随想 Reply with quote

秋日随想

再没有沉醉的村落
像星群簇拥着大地
又像星星散落在平原
只有车辆倾泻着火流

午夜如水般静谧
却再找不到昨日的灯台
所有的经过转眼成为历史
新的旋转成为舞台
秋风荡起了无尽的回忆
黄叶如翩翩的蝴蝶
以醉的姿态飞翔

寻觅终极如寻觅灵魂的归处
以一种浓烈的色彩在另一处复活

村庄,我呼唤恒久的名字
愿意在灵魂的醉乡再醉一回
伴随着沉醉的灵魂寻找梦中的村落
故乡的渔火却也沉淀在回忆的深处
日夜拍打的浪涛回复最初的平静
让灵魂的故乡重筑舞台

海鸥含着昨日在午夜的莲盘盛开
生命那些深深浅浅的痕迹
再难觅昨天的歌台
生命要在下一个轮回演绎
在梦的深处寻找前世的记忆
纷纷是醉也是醒,在梦的边缘打开未来
活过一次只是时间的星星点点
生命的记忆在经历中加深印痕
美丽能否在敞开的窗口重回昨日
瞬间绽放也滤过信念的深纹
时间的钟响在千年之间来回摆渡
在无尽的黎明承接未来
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2007-01-08 23:08:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

更多的像散文诗
在抒情和思考之间, 找到了生长点
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-01-08 23:14:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

故乡的渔火却也沉淀在回忆的深处
日夜拍打的浪涛回复最初的平静
让灵魂的故乡重筑舞台
。。。。有散文的美。
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风动松柏
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PostPosted: 2007-01-09 02:07:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好.是的,我很多诗歌都有散文的浓烈.
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PostPosted: 2007-01-09 07:48:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

平静的叙述演绎着美的诗行.
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PostPosted: 2007-01-09 15:07:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 wrote:
平静的叙述演绎着美的诗行.
谢谢,让你说对了.
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