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核

白水
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Posted: 2008-02-23 08:31:18 Post subject: 核

核穹颅打开我的父, 帮我打开穹颅打开天体, 打开我疼痛的迷走神经牵不动中枢变形的脊骨, 发稍湿冷对, 唯有发稍我用黑色的发打捞黑夜一颗流星, 又一颗从银河的末端滑下来祖先橙黄的基因与大海交媾. 等待是你的哭喊唤醒早晨 **

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-02-23 08:48:36 Post subject:

待题？祝好～

白水
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Posted: 2008-02-23 10:47:43 Post subject:

是啊, 最近我的副交感神经走势太强, 写完想说的话,脑子就不WORK了, 所以向朋友们讨标题来了

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-02-23 15:59:02 Post subject:

时空感很强。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

杨海军
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Posted: 2008-02-23 19:15:18 Post subject:

是你的哭喊唤醒早晨 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2008-02-23 20:59:20 Post subject:

刚好点开的文集背景音乐，很适合你诗，就像能跟着旋律唱出来

金金
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Posted: 2008-02-23 22:28:08 Post subject:

顶起来了读。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-02-23 22:53:11 Post subject:

直切生活内核的一首.

白水
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Posted: 2008-02-24 07:18:22 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

时空感很强。

谢谢后来的对话, 我还担心难得共鸣呢 Wink

白水
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Posted: 2008-02-24 07:19:22 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

是你的哭喊
唤醒早晨

问好海军

白水
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Posted: 2008-02-24 07:20:35 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

刚好点开的文集背景音乐，很适合你诗，就像能跟着旋律唱出来

QQ, 什么好音乐啊 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-02-24 07:21:34 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

顶起来了读。

久不见, 问好金金

回到拉萨
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Posted: 2008-02-24 07:22:33 Post subject:

疼痛的迷走神经牵不动中枢变形的脊骨, 发稍湿冷对, 唯有发稍我用黑色的发打捞黑夜喜欢，拉萨问好。 _________________ 点击进入回到拉萨的火车

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Posted: 2008-02-24 07:22:57 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

直切生活内核的一首.

谢谢赵福治, 得题了. 这就去改 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-02-24 07:27:26 Post subject:

回到拉萨 wrote:

疼痛的迷走神经
...

问好回来, 喜欢你的小火车, 多拉点诗歌来. Very Happy

hepingdao
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Posted: 2008-02-25 20:56:13 Post subject:

更抽象一些好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2008-03-07 18:47:58 Post subject: Re: 更抽象一些好

hepingdao wrote:

更抽象一些
好

谢谢.

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Posted: 2008-04-18 21:40:06 Post subject:

丰富的想像力,欣赏! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

白水
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Posted: 2008-04-19 04:31:22 Post subject:

谢谢鼓励, 问好

莞君
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Posted: 2008-04-19 16:04:11 Post subject:

我用黑色的发打捞黑夜一颗流星, 又一颗从银河的末端滑下来祖先橙黄的基因与大海交媾. 等待是你的哭喊唤醒早晨把姐姐的诗歌顶起来问好 _________________ 莞君

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