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诗人是怎么死的（外四）

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Posted: 2008-02-22 19:15:53 Post subject: 诗人是怎么死的（外四）

《诗人是怎么死的》今天晚上，要放烟花他们说，诗人就是在夜幕中绽放出最美丽花的时候，死的我说这不对，诗人是在烟花散尽人都离去的时候，自己守着一地纸屑，才想到了死《在书店》金屋藏娇是件幸福的事情封底的标价，让我想到了古代一个贵族女儿的聘礼。我决定，以一个嫖客的身份出现，这多少有点无耻。她们在自己的梯子上高翘着腿,身子若隐若无我翻阅的，无非是皮毛之类的东西至于私处，我要费些时间寻找店内巡视的管理员，来回的走动这让我无法更深的进入。我有点愤怒我对着他们，不禁脱口而出：“老鸨。” 《正月十六》街上。昨天那么多灯笼那么多人没了《车祸》一辆由东往西的车一辆由西往东的车我真的听到一声枪响地上流了很多血《发现》五岁的儿子掉了一颗牙齿我看到之后，他对我说他另外的一颗牙齿也有点松动 2008.02.22 _________________ 点击进入回到拉萨的火车

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Posted: 2008-02-22 21:04:18 Post subject:

两首短点的，意味更悲怆些。问好回到拉萨，喜欢的感觉 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2008-02-22 21:38:30 Post subject:

书店这样写倒是挺新鲜的。每诗都不错，自然，不俗。两位都是有很大潜力的，我都喜欢读。问好。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2008-02-22 22:05:26 Post subject:

回来了. 喜欢你的诗歌. 读你的诗歌,想起一首旧作, 顺手贴过来了. http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=66740#66740

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Posted: 2008-02-22 22:09:16 Post subject:

喔～搞懂了！什么叫做外N首终于搞懂了。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-02-22 22:24:01 Post subject:

《诗人是怎么死的》我很喜欢却觉得“渐渐的冰寒”。《书店》没有什么意思。个人看法。

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Posted: 2008-02-23 20:02:24 Post subject:

很有趣的诗歌。本小姐决定跟踪你下一贴——快点写啊 ……只是题目“诗人是怎么死的”，让我立刻想到“杨贵妃是怎么死的”，，呵呵

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Posted: 2008-02-24 04:07:52 Post subject:

写得有趣！

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书店这样写倒是挺新鲜的。每诗都不错，自然，不俗。
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看了，写的很好。
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喔～搞懂了！什么叫做外N首终于搞懂了。

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很有趣的诗歌。本小姐决定跟踪你下一贴——快点写啊
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:38:56 Post subject:

别处有情趣。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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