| 灯台小老鼠 童生
 
 
 Joined: 19 Feb 2008
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 Location: 中国广东广州
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				|  Posted: 2008-02-23 09:28:51    Post subject: (独领风骚-叙事短诗)读迪拜小片段叙事短诗 |   |  
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				| 是在叙事, 还说哲理
 
 不是爱上层楼,
 却也在等回帖
 
 句短,
 路长
 
 飞鸟的方向,
 柜门已打开,不能再关
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		| 詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2008-02-23 09:32:08    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 给您编辑进迪拜斑竹的主题内,若有不妥,还请指正。 _________________
 可情可理,去捧就真
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		| 灯台小老鼠 童生
 
 
 Joined: 19 Feb 2008
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				|  Posted: 2008-02-23 09:35:38    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 板主看着办,我还不太明白此处规矩。 |  | 
	
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		| 詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 15 May 2007
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				|  Posted: 2008-02-23 09:39:25    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 灯台小老鼠 wrote: |  
	  | 板主看着办,我还不太明白此处规矩。 |  
 没有规矩就是落尘的规矩。大家方便就好,有机会可多讨论。
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