是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-02-22 09:34:13 Post subject: 七律 - 云 |
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无端思绪上流云,好梦随风去远门。
叠叠重重疑弄月,疏疏密密为藏痕?
飞天不顾游人意,落地才凝暮雨魂。
莫笑青山空锁土,身虽自在缺安根。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-22 16:13:04 Post subject: |
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由云变化兴叹,讽谕人间状态.欣赏. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-22 17:11:08 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
由云变化兴叹,讽谕人间状态.欣赏. |
同感。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-02-22 21:02:52 Post subject: |
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拜读佳作,问好作者。 |
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郑达夫 秀才

Joined: 29 Oct 2007 Posts: 734 Location: 福建永春仙夾園德樓 362604 郑达夫Collection |
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他乡客 秀才
Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 487 Location: 加拿大.渥汰华 (Ottawa, Canada) 他乡客Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-23 06:11:11 Post subject: |
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既然上了天,登了月,就继续向里走,留在那里.还回来落地找找什么根呢.  |
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老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
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Posted: 2008-02-23 06:40:34 Post subject: |
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欣赏 潇洒灵动 |
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灯台小老鼠 童生
Joined: 19 Feb 2008 Posts: 82 Location: 中国广东广州 灯台小老鼠Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-23 08:15:36 Post subject: |
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喜欢中间两联 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-23 21:08:30 Post subject: |
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起句不凡! 若后面环环相扣,会更好. |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:26:39 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
由云变化兴叹,讽谕人间状态.欣赏. |
多谢黄老师雅赏。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:28:28 Post subject: |
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莹雪 wrote: |
黄洋界 wrote: |
由云变化兴叹,讽谕人间状态.欣赏. |
同感。 |
也谢莹雪雅阅。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:29:27 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
拜读佳作,问好作者。 |
先生客气了。也问好! |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:31:30 Post subject: |
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谢谢楹联高手谬奖。顺致问候! |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:33:11 Post subject: |
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他乡客 wrote: |
既然上了天,登了月,就继续向里走,留在那里.还回来落地找找什么根呢.  |
问得有理。哎,偏偏这个复杂的人,想这还要想那! |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:34:08 Post subject: |
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多谢美誉。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:35:58 Post subject: |
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谢谢小老鼠。祝您鼠年大发。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:39:02 Post subject: |
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暗香如沁 wrote: |
呵呵呵呵.学习了.写得甚有感触。 |
谢谢阅读。大家相互学习。这几天读了一些您的佳作,很喜欢。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:40:48 Post subject: |
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冰清 wrote: |
起句不凡! 若后面环环相扣,会更好. |
多谢冰清老师指点。 |
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