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七律 - 云
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 09:34:13    Post subject: 七律 - 云 Reply with quote

无端思绪上流云,好梦随风去远门。
叠叠重重疑弄月,疏疏密密为藏痕?
飞天不顾游人意,落地才凝暮雨魂。
莫笑青山空锁土,身虽自在缺安根。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 16:13:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

由云变化兴叹,讽谕人间状态.欣赏.
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 17:11:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
由云变化兴叹,讽谕人间状态.欣赏.
同感。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 21:02:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读佳作,问好作者。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 22:39:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏!问候
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 06:11:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

既然上了天,登了月,就继续向里走,留在那里.还回来落地找找什么根呢. Razz
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 06:40:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏 潇洒灵动
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灯台小老鼠
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 08:15:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢中间两联
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 17:32:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵呵呵.学习了.写得甚有感触。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 21:08:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

起句不凡! 若后面环环相扣,会更好.
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 19:26:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
由云变化兴叹,讽谕人间状态.欣赏.


多谢黄老师雅赏。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 19:28:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
黄洋界 wrote:
由云变化兴叹,讽谕人间状态.欣赏.
同感。


也谢莹雪雅阅。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 19:29:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
拜读佳作,问好作者。


先生客气了。也问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 19:31:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

郑达夫 wrote:
欣赏!问候


谢谢楹联高手谬奖。顺致问候!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 19:33:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

他乡客 wrote:
既然上了天,登了月,就继续向里走,留在那里.还回来落地找找什么根呢. Razz


问得有理。哎,偏偏这个复杂的人,想这还要想那!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 19:34:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

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欣赏 潇洒灵动


多谢美誉。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 19:35:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

灯台小老鼠 wrote:
喜欢中间两联


谢谢小老鼠。祝您鼠年大发。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 19:39:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

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呵呵呵呵.学习了.写得甚有感触。


谢谢阅读。大家相互学习。这几天读了一些您的佳作,很喜欢。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 19:40:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
起句不凡! 若后面环环相扣,会更好.


多谢冰清老师指点。
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