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风无痕
童生


Joined: 22 Feb 2008
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Location: 云南
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 22:14:50    Post subject: 回到家乡 Reply with quote

回到家乡
我就是山巅一棵青松
眼睛从没停止过对天空的仰望
渴望中有宽阔的梦想

回到家乡
我就是田野的一粒麦种
在肥沃的土地里发芽,破土
根和其他根在土壤里纠结,缠绵

回到家乡哦,回到家乡
我才知道
我只是一株蒲公英的种子哟
虽有过盛开的绚烂
却逃不过飘泊的忧伤
《生命的颜色》
我不知道
我为什么不能平静

我除了在思索生命的颜色之外
我还想获取一种热切
或是一抹唇角的温柔
还有幽林深处青鸟的那一声脆啼
这一切时刻都在牵扯着我的灵魂
挣扎在无边的黑夜里

总错误的认为
生命的颜色是
浓烈的胭脂红
一道暗红的伤痕
或是深秋的那一片深红

在时间的河流里
拖着漂白疲惫的身躯
才渐悟了生命的颜色是
包含所有的颜色而又脱离所有色的

回首,月明风轻
你浅笑依然
在不远处
向我走来
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迪拜
同进士出身


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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 22:25:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好

多交流。
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风无痕
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 22:47:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢迪拜老师。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 01:52:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

风无痕大学在读吗?
感觉很青春。
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 07:06:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

更喜欢末段. 欢迎新朋友
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 08:08:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

虽有过盛开的绚烂
却逃不过飘泊的忧伤
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风无痕
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 05:12:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢NOBODY来看看,我因早年辍学在家务农。现常年在外打工。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 05:13:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水老师了,请多指教。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 05:14:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢半溪明月老师,请多指教。
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