白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-22 22:02:58 Post subject: 礼花 |
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礼花
你骄傲的
悬挂在
冰凉的夜空
我
终于相信
美艳绝倫的绚烂
绽放在
生命的尾声
12.22.04 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-22 22:07:23 Post subject: |
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恩,04年的~ _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
迪拜Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-22 22:27:16 Post subject: |
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姐姐的
内涵
目前是越来越深了
《礼花》
显然平了一点。 |
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遛达的七七 秀才

Joined: 07 Jun 2006 Posts: 329
遛达的七七Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-23 00:12:40 Post subject: |
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哎呀这么短!! 一分钟看六遍还富裕
……没看够,不过瘾,要不你再加长点儿?
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2008-02-23 01:48:37 Post subject: |
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我绽放啰。。。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-23 07:04:53 Post subject: |
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谢谢各位朋友. 没人, 你可别绽放, 枫树等你浇水呢.  |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-23 08:05:20 Post subject: |
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美艳绝倫的绚烂
绽放在
生命的尾声
哲理~  |
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遛达的七七 秀才

Joined: 07 Jun 2006 Posts: 329
遛达的七七Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-23 21:09:24 Post subject: |
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喂喂喂,那个Nobody,你别别别呀!我这儿还没点火呢,你绽放个P呀你 |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-24 07:29:11 Post subject: |
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七小姐 wrote: |
喂喂喂,那个Nobody,你别别别呀!我这儿还没点火呢,你绽放个P呀你 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-24 07:29:52 Post subject: |
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金金 wrote: |
问好你,有段时间没看你的诗歌了。“) |
见到你很高兴, 问好 |
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樱花听雨 秀才

Joined: 24 Oct 2006 Posts: 356 Location: 中国黑龙江省国电双鸭山发电有限公司化学分场 丁冬梅 邮编 155136 樱花听雨Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-24 21:25:52 Post subject: |
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我想起来我曾经也写过礼花 _________________ 樱花听雨搜狐博客
樱花听雨新浪博客 |
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溪语 秀才
Joined: 16 Mar 2007 Posts: 509 Location: 中国恩施 溪语Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-24 22:49:23 Post subject: |
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美艳绝倫的绚烂
绽放在
生命的尾声 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西 |
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叶英儿 秀才
Joined: 03 Jun 2006 Posts: 577 Location: 中国 叶英儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-24 23:22:55 Post subject: 不错. |
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不错.美丽的诗. |
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子花 秀才
Joined: 08 Mar 2007 Posts: 722
子花Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-25 04:14:33 Post subject: |
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可以深入点浅见!!新年好!!! |
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上城 进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007 Posts: 2024 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼 上城Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-25 19:36:11 Post subject: |
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很有美感呢.唯美的特色 问好 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要 |
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