林丫头
童生
Joined: 10 Feb 2008
Posts: 10
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 Posted: 2008-02-10 22:33:24 Post subject: 鹧鸪天 *无言*赠西海沿子任上宝玉 |
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鹧鸪天 *无言*赠西海沿子任上宝玉
莫是钗瞳是玉瞳？
更临几度泪相逢？
檀香别拜伤离索，点点依依玉树丛。
归去懒，梦魂空，
坐来愁夜雪初融。
吹萧谁共湘妃语，
隐隐天涯此意浓。 |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2008-02-11 20:36:24 Post subject: |
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吹萧谁共湘妃语， 隐隐天涯此意浓。喜欢结句。
诗中“钗”、“玉”是指薛宝钗和贾宝玉吗？
问好新朋友！ |
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戴玨
秀才
Joined: 03 Jan 2007
Posts: 808
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| Posted: 2008-02-12 13:07:47 Post subject: |
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归去懒，梦魂空，
坐来愁夜雪初融。
真是清冷！
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暗香如沁
秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
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是有缘
秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008
Posts: 741
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| Posted: 2008-02-21 15:43:34 Post subject: |
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情景共融，好词。
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