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◆墓地

郭全华
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Joined: 28 Feb 2007
Posts: 145

郭全华Collection

Posted: 2008-02-20 05:04:48 Post subject: ◆墓地

◆墓地请别责怪野花烂漫它太寂寞，它的放肆里有太多的安谧时间的松针穿透微风生死之间，墓地是唯一的坡压低声音，放慢脚步清明如一盏灯，点亮先人的生命鲜花里盛开着后辈的责任收敛翅膀，人类得以喘息小草在墓地旁边颤抖，那是生死的边界富可敌国的荣誉只需一隅就可淹没一抔高拱的黄土是生命的休止符号多少安静被标榜，唯独墓地未受损 _________________ 借助诗歌，努力把自己活成一棵树，白天向上，夜里向下．

迪拜
同进士出身

Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

迪拜Collection

Posted: 2008-02-20 18:40:06 Post subject:

开头很好但是结尾平淡了点。个人看法。

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