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(独领风骚-图像)一枝红玫瑰
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PostPosted: 2008-02-13 16:15:20    Post subject: (独领风骚-图像)一枝红玫瑰 Reply with quote

不知道自什么时候起,红玫瑰成了表达浪漫与温馨的礼物,成了王子
与公主的定情之物。于是年来年去,每年的圣瓦伦灯节(西方的情人
节),红玫瑰常常变得紧俏,供不应求,价格往往也是一涨再涨。今
天又到了这个节日,你是不是也要给你的爱人或你的梦中情人送一枝
红玫瑰呢?下面一首小诗,祝福你情人节快乐!



什么时候开始的浪漫
挥霍着今日满城的红玫瑰
心里的冲动
只为着今天也去浪漫一回

摇曳的烛影
又怎能不为这个特殊的日子举杯
感化的泪水
也为今生的浪漫点点地沉醉

眼前的这枝红玫瑰
今晚送给谁


一枝红玫瑰-苏茉儿、一枝红玫瑰-悠子、一枝红玫瑰-Zhaozijun、
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PostPosted: 2008-02-13 16:21:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

不成!有缘兄!您得作些文字上的叙述,让大家看看您是如何由这幅图画发想出这首
作品。这是(独领风骚)这个单元必备的元素,您再作个编辑叙述可好?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-13 16:40:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

这下是不是可以了呢?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-13 16:53:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

是有缘 wrote:
这下是不是可以了呢?


好!谢谢有缘兄!其他的我打理,有问题再告诉我。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-13 21:05:23    Post subject: 独领风骚-一枝红玫瑰 Reply with quote


一枝红玫瑰

象征爱情的戳记
打印在信封上、信纸上
还要做成小小的书签
这书签上、信纸上、信封上
用力书写出爱的箴言
不只让你,还有全世界
知道有爱情
象征爱情的图腾
烙印在心底、在手臂
还要做成小小的钥匙圈
串在我的腰际
丁丁冬冬,要随时随地响起
在耳边响个不停
叨叨念念,响个不停
知道我有爱情
知道你在哪里
知道是有缘,响起

2008/2/14那天1310
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PostPosted: 2008-02-14 06:45:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

知道是有缘,响起 --- 很妙~
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PostPosted: 2008-02-14 08:32:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

有缘兄,嗯~~~送给有情人啊。要不茉儿替你送。Razz

诗盗那个很玫瑰味儿。打倒!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-14 09:45:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
知道是有缘,响起 --- 很妙~


很妙?太暧昧!打倒!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-14 09:46:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
有缘兄,嗯~~~送给有情人啊。要不茉儿替你送。Razz
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玫瑰味?后现代表示法?打倒!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-14 21:49:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗盗是不是要把向情人献花的仪对世界实况转播啊?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-15 14:01:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

看到了玫瑰花, 还闻到了茉儿讲的玫瑰味道,
等我拿把剪刀, 趁你们不备偷花~~~~
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PostPosted: 2008-02-15 15:53:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

一枝红玫瑰


2月14日
对对情侣的影子
掉进满街的玫瑰丛
与花影婆娑
流动成幸福的颜色

而我对你的爱
也早已经含苞待放!

我要在晚霞之下
耐心守候,守候第一缕月光
扣响心窗,为你
灿烂成最娇艳的一朵
一瓣一瓣,一簇一簇
吐露醉人的芬芳

月光也醉了
谷穗般的弯下腰
轻轻抚摸我花蕊中充盈的情愫
心,紧紧的拉住月光的手
奔赴你的窗前

吻出一道
深深的玫瑰红!



有缘兄我也接一首,看图写诗,与你的原意毫不相干。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 08:30:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

茉儿这个和得好,纤纤之情,天地为之动容。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 08:32:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
有缘兄,嗯~~~送给有情人啊。要不茉儿替你送。Razz
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你去吧(好感动),看看你送给谁?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 08:39:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

是有缘 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
有缘兄,嗯~~~送给有情人啊。要不茉儿替你送。Razz
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你去吧(好感动),看看你送给谁?


送给有缘兄,一定一定!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:14:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

是有缘 wrote:
诗盗是不是要把向情人献花的仪对世界实况转播啊?


不!我要把您推向全世界!哈哈

原来的玫瑰消失!我先补上这朵,您再看看要更换否。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-20 16:35:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情
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