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作诗有感(六首)

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冰清
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Posted: 2008-02-20 13:15:38 Post subject:

谢三位版主! 崇超,我很欣赏你那句话:”无情不必写诗.我写诗更多是想记录自己的心思,为所爱.” “无情不必写诗",这话可说把诗歌吟咏情性的本质说出来了.“诗缘情",而且"信情貌之不差,故每变而在颜".情性是诗歌的第一要义,而诗作如果又真正做到感情、形象、文辞的完美结合,诗人的心志有了好的"颜面”,就更耐品耐读了. 可惜,我没做到！

冰清
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Posted: 2008-02-23 21:57:19 Post subject: 作诗有感(4)

(4) 契入神悟气意优悠遇缪斯，云阶月地任神驰。天思妙指心裁剪，好是通灵洞悟时。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-02-24 06:54:50 Post subject:

缪斯萦怀,神驰云月,天思裁剪,通灵洞悟,全诗字字珠矶,道出了作诗的神悟之功,欣赏学习. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

是有缘
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Posted: 2008-02-24 19:12:05 Post subject:

冰清好诗，众友雅兴，在此也偷和一下：晓月沉沉入目痴，风声似语几更时？从来好梦情难契，夜尽霜凝一古诗。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

冰清
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Posted: 2008-02-29 14:10:06 Post subject:

谢谢黄兄和有缘鉴评，和诗。

冰清
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Posted: 2008-02-29 14:12:00 Post subject: 作诗有感(5)

(5)歌哭恁情痴神传意得秀天姿，夜涌泉流不自持。时起飘萧樽对月，是歌是哭恁情痴。

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Posted: 2008-02-29 17:16:46 Post subject:

喜读作诗有感第五首,由情而歌,由情而哭,诗缘于情,无情则无诗,"无情未必真豪杰,怜子如何不丈夫",由此观之,无病呻吟之作,实不足取.读冰清诗而受教益,盼读冰清续作. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-03-02 14:34:35 Post subject: Re: 作诗有感(5)

冰清 wrote:

(5)歌哭恁情痴
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情到真处诗感人。欣赏。

彝族余继聪
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Posted: 2008-03-07 19:15:20 Post subject:

后两句很触动我心弦,喜欢。我的新浪博客欢迎你光临http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1250052373

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-03-07 21:55:46 Post subject:

和《歌哭恁情痴》随心无语是天姿，笑看春山岂自持！微雨淅淅依旧在，旁人休管也真痴！ _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

冰清
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Posted: 2008-03-10 10:36:26 Post subject:

谢有缘、继聪和二黄班长. 旁人休管,真痴也.喜欢!

冰清
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Posted: 2008-03-10 10:48:00 Post subject: 作诗有感（6）七律•诗怀

（6）七律•诗怀平生进退踹蹬之，半醉半仙几见痴。万物非争犹善水，游心无待不容私。微音心动澄虚静，大貌情钟耽妙思。神意高居难问否? 人诗一似得天时。

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Posted: 2008-03-10 13:06:02 Post subject:

喜度冰清《诗怀》，颈联意蕴深邃，用词佳妙，“人诗一似得天时“这是何等高超的境界！收藏学习。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-03-10 15:10:40 Post subject:

作诗的心得就那么多啊！仰望。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

冰清
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Posted: 2008-03-11 11:59:08 Post subject:

谢黄兄、有缘鼓励！ "人诗一似得天时", 我也喜欢这一句. 《诗怀》, 有感于庄子的"游心"说. 庄子十分强调为人的"虚静"状态. 运用到创作上, 他认为, 若作者达到了"心之游才"、"无须凭借", 其精神就可以闲适放松、无拘无束. 这样也就可以任凭其思想的自由驰骋而体悟万物了.

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