合心 秀才
Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 122 Location: 山西太原 合心Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-19 00:08:35 Post subject: 《凝.寻》 |
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《凝.寻》
此刻,我只是
一粒尘埃,分不清
体内流动的是水,还是风
徘徊,徘徊
天空掌灯,与我一起
守望 你的方向 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金 |
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合心 秀才
Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 122 Location: 山西太原 合心Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-19 00:09:34 Post subject: |
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祝落尘的诗友2008健康如意 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-19 06:31:00 Post subject: |
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问好合心。
很娟秀的小诗。诗盗怎么打都打不倒。 |
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苏茉儿 秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007 Posts: 739
苏茉儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-19 08:54:46 Post subject: |
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也祝合心健康如意!小巧玲珑的诗! _________________ 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-19 09:08:15 Post subject: |
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谢谢合心来落尘!落尘目前对第一首作品要以礼相待,不开刷! _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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合心 秀才
Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 122 Location: 山西太原 合心Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-19 17:51:34 Post subject: |
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刷吧
开心就好 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-19 18:37:33 Post subject: |
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轻灵小诗,也有味。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-19 19:47:24 Post subject: |
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合心 wrote: |
刷吧
开心就好 |
期待您开个主题,我去买钢刷! _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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