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照着我的月亮

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Posted: 2008-02-11 20:14:24 Post subject: 照着我的月亮

照着我的月亮倒影在水的中央远方的你是不是也迷恋着她细碎的银光照着我的月亮高高地挂在树梢上朦胧的月色是不是也费了你的一番思量照着我的月亮掩藏了星星一半的光芒从一个星座到另一个星座到底需要多少时光照着我的月亮悄悄地下了山冈无眠的夜啊去到尽头的路还有多长照着我的月亮一天天地改变着模样两个星体有多少的概率今生能够碰撞照着我的月亮是否也有着美梦的幻想能把我默默的心语串成遥寄给你的诗行

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Posted: 2008-02-18 05:40:38 Post subject:

细腻的情感

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Posted: 2008-02-18 22:44:03 Post subject:

月亮在你的心里了！

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Posted: 2008-02-19 00:22:40 Post subject:

思念绵长 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-03-18 17:30:47 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

细腻的情感

谢谢白水细心阅读。

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Posted: 2008-03-18 17:32:09 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

月亮

在你的心里了！

诗为心声。

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Posted: 2008-03-18 17:33:20 Post subject:

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思念绵长

明月千里寄相思

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Posted: 2008-03-18 18:14:36 Post subject:

哎呀，照到我了。hehehe........... _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-18 18:19:40 Post subject:

美丽的吟唱----- 韵律优美，诗是我心歌！再会！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-03-18 19:49:19 Post subject:

苏茉儿 wrote:

哎呀，照到我了。hehehe...........

你好！

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Posted: 2008-03-18 19:51:10 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

美丽的吟唱-----

韵律优美，诗是我心歌！

再会！

谢谢诗人赏阅。再会，韩兄。

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Posted: 2008-03-18 22:11:02 Post subject:

提欣赏了问好 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-03-24 07:57:22 Post subject:

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提欣赏了问好

谢谢莞君。问好！

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Posted: 2008-04-16 17:16:27 Post subject:

能把我默默的心语串风成遥寄给你的诗行美好的诗,让我享受,谢谢 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-04-16 19:06:26 Post subject:

美好的感情，优美的抒情~问好!

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Posted: 2008-04-27 21:04:38 Post subject:

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能把我默默的心语
串风成遥寄给你的诗行
美好的诗,让我享受,谢谢

谢谢钓月欣赏。抱歉迟复。问好！

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Posted: 2008-04-27 21:06:31 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

美好的感情，优美的抒情~问好!

谢谢半溪明月赏读并留言。你的ID很有诗意。问好。

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