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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:13:06    Post subject: (独领风骚-图像) 一枝红玫瑰 Reply with quote



2月14日
对对情侣的影子
掉进满街的玫瑰丛
与花影婆娑
流动成幸福的颜色

而我对你的爱
也早已经含苞待放!

我要在晚霞之下
耐心守候,守候第一缕月光
扣响心窗,为你
灿烂成最娇艳的一朵
一瓣一瓣,一簇一簇
吐露醉人的芬芳

月光也醉了
谷穗般的弯下腰
轻轻抚摸我花蕊中充盈的情愫
心,紧紧的拉住月光的手
奔赴你的窗前

吻出一道
深深的玫瑰红
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:16:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

这朵也不错吧?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:18:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

疑,怎么多了个叹号???
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:19:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

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这朵也不错吧?


还行吧。像我写的那朵。哈哈~~
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:20:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

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疑,怎么多了个叹号???


小声点!那是暗号!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:22:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

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苏茉儿 wrote:
疑,怎么多了个叹号???


小声点!那是暗号!


噢!意思是说,下雨了,小心跌倒。哈哈~~~你看那叹号像不像雨滴!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:25:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
疑,怎么多了个叹号???


小声点!那是暗号!


噢!意思是说,下雨了,小心跌倒。哈哈~~~你看那叹号像不像雨滴!


切!这么简单算什么暗号?那是本版作品评分暗码。懂不?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:28:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

噢!这就是一个人长一个脑袋嘛,你不说,人人都可以想象出一个意向啊。切!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:33:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

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噢!这就是一个人长一个脑袋嘛,你不说,人人都可以想象出一个意向啊。切!


暗码说了还叫做暗码?留下想像空间才好嘛,当然不能说!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 09:59:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

这作品是好是坏,您就砍啊。别不好意思,您有来言我有去语,大不了砍不过就跑贝!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 10:04:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

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这作品是好是坏,您就砍啊。别不好意思,您有来言我有去语,大不了砍不过就跑贝!


跑了我砍空气?您有(尬雌)就留着接招!跑?算哪门子英雌美女!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 10:15:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

俺本来就不是美女,不怕。去看拈花兄的图片说话去了,你也试试,看咱俩谁说的好。
哈哈!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 10:19:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

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俺本来就不是美女,不怕。去看拈花兄的图片说话去了,你也试试,看咱俩谁说的好。
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试就试!谁怕谁?乌龟还怕铁锤?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 10:22:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
俺本来就不是美女,不怕。去看拈花兄的图片说话去了,你也试试,看咱俩谁说的好。
...


试就试!谁怕谁?乌龟还怕铁锤?


更正!晕~俺怎把自己比了乌龟?

蟑螂还怕拖鞋?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-16 10:49:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
俺本来就不是美女,不怕。去看拈花兄的图片说话去了,你也试试,看咱俩谁说的好。
...


试就试!谁怕谁?乌龟还怕铁锤?


更正!晕~俺怎把自己比了乌龟?
...


哈哈,没事没事,不经意间说的才是真话。哈哈。。。。我啥也没看见!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-17 16:28:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
俺本来就不是美女,不怕。去看拈花兄的图片说话去了,你也试试,看咱俩谁说的好。
...


试就试!谁怕谁?乌龟还怕铁锤?


更正!晕~俺怎把自己比了乌龟?
...


哈哈,没事没事,不经意间说的才是真话。哈哈。。。。我啥也没看见!


不经意间说的话叫做梦话,所以说过了也记不住。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-18 15:22:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,没想诗盗兄着了道儿。看把茉儿开心的。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-18 16:32:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

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哈哈,没想诗盗兄着了道儿。看把茉儿开心的。


是啊!这个世界就是不公平,他送您玫瑰,我逗他开心!真不公平。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-18 17:37:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

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哈哈,没想诗盗兄着了道儿。看把茉儿开心的。


哼!有缘兄,茉儿又不是女巫,没本事让那叫啊,诗盗的着我的道儿嘛!还有,你每天来坐会儿,喝杯茉花茶啥的,那茉儿也不至于闲到和那叫啊,诗盗的一起砍空气了不是。

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PostPosted: 2008-02-18 17:39:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

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哈哈,没想诗盗兄着了道儿。看把茉儿开心的。


是啊!这个世界就是不公平,他送您玫瑰,我逗他开心!真不公平。


哪儿啊,明明就是我逗您开心嘛,怎赖我头上,这个世界真不公平!哼!
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