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《风景》

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Posted: 2008-02-14 04:02:04 Post subject: 《风景》

《风景》 1. 没有季节的岸，娓娓的是叶边的风。清晰的掌纹里晶莹的水，淌下水上有季节吗，迷醉的红用风调色，昼现夜舞，浮起沉酿的蓝我确信，这是蓝上的季节此刻，曦与霭的旋律风与浪的交响，描绘出内心的风景象想像中的你 2. 水上的私语，瞬间凝结的是永恒的美。岸边细风揉碎了一帘秋梦迷失的音符，恍惚中疲惫了夜的尘星。月华洗白一地花落，飘散成歌我该怎样用她缝制二月的衣裳粉黛遮憔悴，轻启朱唇望风景中的你 3. 风与水的旋律是微澜，幽咽，还是寂寂星与月的夜空，是否有处留白彼岸的你，能否闻到清香你又是否与我一样，一直在想我们相遇的那个季节 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-02-14 09:00:51 Post subject:

幽幽的，悠悠的的情。好作！霭是不是应该是这个字。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-02-14 09:23:53 Post subject:

合心 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-02-14 17:57:25 Post subject:

霭,谢谢嗯,合心问好 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-02-14 18:00:34 Post subject:

诗情画意真美！

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Posted: 2008-02-16 23:11:04 Post subject:

水上有季节吗，迷醉的红用风调色，昼现夜舞，浮起沉酿的蓝 ....画面感很强,欣赏.

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Posted: 2008-02-17 18:48:43 Post subject:

盗赏草记海会天于蓝，浪打风飘散。恍惚醉迷红，浮沉旋律断。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-02-18 20:41:18 Post subject:

恩，慢慢来！呵呵,符合此时心境 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-02-18 22:09:52 Post subject:

合心 wrote:

恩，慢慢来！

呵呵,符合此时心境

喔，那别吝啬，贴首作品到落尘来吧！派一辆加长型礼车接您。
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