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情人节快乐

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Posted: 2008-02-13 08:31:01 Post subject: 情人节快乐

《这枝玫瑰》情人被吊上天花板红心裸露在对望中，只管摄取路人的双眼一个女孩站在檐下背贴橱窗街灯斑斓着，浓艳胸前白净柔长的纱肩一朵血红的玫瑰，咬在唇边眼神，被车辆挡在路间些须期盼，些须杂乱昨夜的梦里，他没说约见如同说爱便是对爱的背叛手中的玫瑰只依然开放着温暖暖着手，暖着寒天她，宁愿信呵，他也有一张卖花人般默默含笑的脸无言，只把关怀满填《虚幻的真实》一种真实真实中我们彼此聆听呼吸是生命的注脚真实中我们把爱情的树一起种下一种恍惚不知不觉间，我们把爱情的树养殖地太高我们自己终于不能采到高处繁荣的果实 02／12／2008 D&B _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-02-13 09:31:23 Post subject:

天花板上种玫瑰，会倒着长啦 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-13 09:44:34 Post subject:

情人被吊上天花板 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-02-13 10:40:35 Post subject:

祝天花板上的情人们快乐

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Posted: 2008-02-13 13:51:23 Post subject:

有没有谁真正试过，把一枝玫瑰咬在嘴里？想知道那感觉呀味道等。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-02-13 15:08:20 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

有没有谁真正试过，把一枝玫瑰咬在嘴里？想知道那感觉呀味道等。

自己就不會咬麽？

送您一枝試試吧。。

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Posted: 2008-02-13 15:27:48 Post subject:

一枝玫瑰，几许相思？ _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-02-13 22:18:38 Post subject:

点点儿 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

有没有谁真正试过，把一枝玫瑰咬在嘴里？想知道那感觉呀味道等。

自己就不会咬么？

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不咬！没咬过，都是一把一把的拿来泡玫瑰花茶，练身体！
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Posted: 2008-02-15 12:19:08 Post subject:

非常棒的细节: 眼神，被车辆挡在路间改＂车辆＂为＂车流＂如何？似更具动感问好! _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-02-15 14:52:07 Post subject:

搬个梯子去采那高处繁荣的果实~~~~~~~~~`

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