是有缘
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 Posted: 2008-02-11 20:08:34 Post subject: 雨做的云，云落的雨 - 和雨清《笺》 |
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雨燕寻飞苦，
清溪引我忧。
白云岭上去，
一落又空愁。
原玉：
[五言] 笺 by 雨清
尝知离别苦，
不忍作君忧。
自取相思去，
为君了千愁。 |
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2008-02-12 00:12:08 Post subject: |
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| 伤感尽显 |
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他乡客
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Location: 加拿大.渥汰华 (Ottawa, Canada)
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| Posted: 2008-02-12 19:48:26 Post subject: |
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| 恕雨清的原玉是发自内心的声音，读起来铿锵有力，动人心弦。是难得的佳作。 |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-02-13 14:42:04 Post subject: |
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谢莹雪君赏读. |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-02-13 14:43:26 Post subject: |
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| 他乡客 wrote: |
| 恕雨清的原玉是发自内心的声音，读起来铿锵有力，动人心弦。是难得的佳作。 |
谢谢他乡客发表读后感. |
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晓松
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| Posted: 2008-02-13 19:57:00 Post subject: |
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| 两首都不错。标题也别致，好像有首歌叫天上有朵雨做的云~ |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-02-13 21:24:44 Post subject: |
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| 晓松 wrote: |
| 两首都不错。标题也别致，好像有首歌叫天上有朵雨做的云~ |
多谢晓松欣赏。 |
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冰清
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Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2008-02-20 13:03:33 Post subject: |
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| 两首都好！ |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-02-20 16:30:13 Post subject: |
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谢冰清美言。问好。
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