林丫头
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 Posted: 2008-02-13 06:54:51 Post subject: 【原创】烛影摇红.思【古音】 |
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月里红窗，为谁不到摇空影？
枉消闲墨问东风，今夜今何兴？
如此情思难赠。
苑淋霜，苔墙竹映。
紫泥翠冷，一缕凉霄，疏疏云径。
未免将来，良辰行去三生醒。
还将冷瑟伴清心，独解花中茗！
幽远幽欢守定，
梦相依，偷潸未肯。
不妨薄醉，枕袖衣卷，噙词痴等！ |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2008-02-13 20:03:52 Post subject: |
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不妨薄醉，枕袖衣卷，噙词痴等！有味道，欣赏~
问好！ |
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hepingdao
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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| Posted: 2008-02-13 20:30:09 Post subject: |
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斜着看也不错
问好林姑娘
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为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-02-13 21:22:55 Post subject: |
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今夜今何兴，不是“今夜因何兴”吧？
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蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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林丫头
童生
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| Posted: 2008-02-14 18:54:47 Post subject: |
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答是有缘：
是今夜今何兴！谢谢指点，常来教我才是！ |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-02-14 22:00:42 Post subject: |
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| 林丫头 wrote: |
答是有缘：
是今夜今何兴！谢谢指点，常来教我才是！ |
俺是来学习的，指导可不敢，还没那水平。 |
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