苏茉儿 秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007 Posts: 739
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Posted: 2008-02-04 10:42:11 Post subject: 叹! |
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风筝
越飞越高
拉在手中的线
被风剪断
你
越走越远
烙在心里的思念
掉了一块
追着模糊了的风筝
吻着缝了又补的思念
无奈 _________________ 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。 |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-09 04:16:18 Post subject: |
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灵动, 新意
问好茉儿 |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2008-02-09 05:31:10 Post subject: |
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缝了又补的思念
够节省的  _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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阿依琼裙 秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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苏茉儿 秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007 Posts: 739
苏茉儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-11 18:55:33 Post subject: |
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谢谢各位,拜个晚年! _________________ 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。 |
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wq0066 秀才
Joined: 01 Jun 2008 Posts: 126 Location: 中国重庆 wq0066Collection |
Posted: 2008-06-19 04:00:07 Post subject: |
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追着模糊了的风筝
吻着缝了又补的思念
"追,吻"这两个动词好漂亮...学习了! _________________ 天边云一朵 苍海粟一粒 云儿朵朵随风飘 粟儿粒粒满山崖 |
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