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叹!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 10:42:11    Post subject: 叹! Reply with quote

风筝
越飞越高
拉在手中的线
被风剪断


越走越远
烙在心里的思念
掉了一块

追着模糊了的风筝
吻着缝了又补的思念

无奈
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 17:14:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

烙在心里的思念
掉了一块
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PostPosted: 2008-02-09 04:16:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

灵动, 新意

问好茉儿
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PostPosted: 2008-02-09 05:31:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

缝了又补的思念

够节省的 Laughing
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阿依琼裙
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PostPosted: 2008-02-09 18:28:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

烙在心里的思念
掉了一块


喜欢“掉”在这里的表达~

问好茉儿 过年好!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-11 18:55:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位,拜个晚年!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-19 04:00:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

追着模糊了的风筝
吻着缝了又补的思念

"追,吻"这两个动词好漂亮...学习了!
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