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蜻蜓的片段
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PostPosted: 2008-02-08 19:36:35    Post subject: 蜻蜓的片段 Reply with quote

蜻蜓的片段


“青头楞”个头硕大,从容飞行,蜻蜓当中,飞出王者风范。气势可比武装直升机,一股高傲贵族气。轻型的“直升机”得给“青头楞”让路,“青头楞”一个眼神儿,那些臣民们便要胆怯,翅膀可能不知道如何扇动了。草丛中如丝线般细弱的小不点儿们与世无争地飞着,大点的风能把他们吹没了。

一类蜻蜓野小子似的,长时间在外面风吹日晒,身体结实得很。一天贼头贼脑,不肯轻易落下,它们喜欢贴地皮飞,尽量不往草上树棍等物上落。落在地上,也不落得很实,仿佛浮着,有东西接近,马上飞走。一类蜻蜓却很柔弱,像只喝露水不吃别的东西,浑身如同水质的。它们似乎久居闺房,出来后一眼望去即知尽是些涉世未深的女子。曝热的夏日,此类“女子”一群一群地飞在低空。眼中一派不设防的神情,舒缓而飞。它们偏爱烈日当空,不怕强烈的阳光晒尽似水柔情。空中举行的舞会,用树条旋也很难旋散。一群群蜻蜒尽情享受光阴,飞得旁若无人。飞于身边的,伸手一抄就可抄到一只。有今天没明天的样子,它们带上不易觉察的哀伤飞过来飞过去。

落在黄瓜架上豆角秧上的蜻蜒似有挑逗之心,逮不住它飞了又落,可能落回原处也可能落于不远处。屏息凝神,悄悄接近,伸出手,当大拇指食指的指尖离蜻蜓几寸远时,蜻蜒的复眼忽然调皮地旋转。有所觉察要飞未飞时,拇指食指的指尖以几分之一秒的速度去捏蜻蜒的尾巴或翅膀,动作迟缓将徒劳一回。捏膀儿容易被发觉,捏尾巴蜻蜓猛一蜷身,手指难免挨咬。手指很疼,小小生灵也有挺大的愤怒。河里水草尖上的“青头楞”诱惑极大,缓缓趟水,小孩子好像正做着一件了不起的大事,逮住那架“直升机”就是逮住了蜻蜓中的王者。王者毕竟威猛,一咬生疼,而冲天的喜悦瞬间止疼。蜘蛛网粘蜻蜓情趣不大。蜻蜓误撞蛛网,蜘蛛美餐一顿,小孩子不会趁机打劫,非得把蜻蜓从网上弄下来玩玩,那样实在乏味。那样做了,蜘蛛只有生气的份儿,飞快地爬到角落暗气暗憋,它决不能张牙舞爪地杀过来。

家人都对自家的小孩子百般疼爱,小孩子根本不拿蜻蜓的小命当命。捉住蜻蜓玩够了,扯膀儿撕碎。蜻蜓无血可流,鼓鼓的复眼无泪可出,这就更触动不了孩童懵懂无知的心。蜻蜓丝丝的肉鲜润着。折腾蜻蜓,翅膀被撕掉一半或是掐断尾巴看蜻蜓怎么飞。蜻蜓到小孩手里不再是自由的生灵,小命无奈而绝望。侥幸脱逃的,飞窜到大树梢那么高,然后向远处飞逃。蜻蜓的膜翅接近完美的对称,飞行中不慎破损了点儿,谁的内心有极大的敏感,对此能稍许流露出淡淡的伤感呢?

半空中的蜻蜓遭遇意外,被别的昆虫叮咬,打着旋儿跌落下来。发生不了意外的时候,蜻蜓静静地飞,我从来没听过蜻蜓好好飞时发出过声音。
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2008-02-08 22:18:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

比较细,因是片断,重在写出童趣,不苛求立意的深刻、新颖了。问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-10 00:09:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

奇怪,怎么这么多空行?希望能重新编辑一下!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-12 03:30:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

帮你重新排了一下,见谅。

问好姜了,欢迎常来,顺祝新年快乐~~~``````
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