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黑夜，有扇洞开的门

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Posted: 2007-01-05 23:55:37 Post subject: 黑夜，有扇洞开的门

——题记：都说“古来圣贤皆寂寞”，其实不然。应该说寂寞属于黑夜，属于所有在黑夜洞开的门。区别仅在于圣贤的黑夜永无昼，他时刻敞开的门能洞悉着一切的黑，足以为后人指引光明，而我们却做不到。必须承认最隐秘的忧虑钟情于黑夜喜欢以梦的形式天马行空地呈现情节，匪夷所思有时，呈现结束那种叫“清醒”的意识回来一扇门会洞开如驿外断桥梅，寂寞无主通常，这扇门不会纠缠那些梦而柴米油盐，是阳光下的忧虑与这扇门，相距甚远借机到门口晃荡的是一些日落前抢记的词句 “平生事，此时凝睇，谁会凭栏意” 会一闪而过。记住，仅仅只是一闪而过。因为冬夜足够的黑即便那雁儿未到南方也无法看清其行是否如缀一般情况下，黑夜中洞开的门只是尽可能地开着试图，让漆黑的沉寂展现出一丝微光

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Posted: 2007-01-06 00:03:02 Post subject:

如果内心亮了黑夜也不再那么黑我们和圣贤的区别是什么呢我们如何在黑夜里看清自己诗人都喜欢黑夜，也许我们眼睛看到的少了内心能看到的，却多了起来上帝是多么公正呀 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-01-06 00:04:58 Post subject:

什末毛病也没挑到,真失望. 喜欢"一般情况下". _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-01-06 05:29:45 Post subject:

感觉可以，但没有引起惊动。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-01-07 04:06:41 Post subject:

记录的是内心一瞬间的感受，非常谢谢楼上的三位评阅！

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Posted: 2007-01-11 20:55:57 Post subject:

呵呵,荷的梦还真够黑的! _________________ 醉梦封喉

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Posted: 2007-01-23 04:09:35 Post subject:

呵呵，是吗？

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Posted: 2007-01-24 20:53:07 Post subject:

喜欢　后现代的味道　 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-01-26 22:16:06 Post subject:

谢谢你的喜欢。其实我写的时候从不管什么味道的啊！呵呵~~~

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Posted: 2007-01-29 01:43:55 Post subject: Re: 黑夜，有扇洞开的门

荷梦 wrote:

——题记：都说“古来圣贤皆寂寞”，其实不然。应该说寂寞属于黑夜，属于所有在黑夜洞开的门。区别仅在于圣贤的黑夜永无昼，他时刻敞开的门能洞悉着一切的黑，足以为后人指引光明，而我们却做不到。

必须承认
最隐秘的忧虑钟情于黑夜
喜欢以梦的形式
天马行空地呈现
情节，匪夷所思

有时，呈现结束
那种叫“清醒”的意识回来
一扇门会洞开
如驿外断桥梅，寂寞无主

通常，这扇门
不会纠缠那些梦
而柴米油盐，是阳光下的忧虑
与这扇门，相距甚远

借机到门口晃荡的
是一些日落前抢记的词句
“平生事，此时凝睇，谁会凭栏意”
会一闪而过。

记住，仅仅只是
一闪而过。因为
冬夜足够的黑
即便那雁儿未到南方
也无法看清其行是否如缀

一般情况下，黑夜中洞开的门
只是尽可能地开着
试图，让漆黑的沉寂
展现出一丝微光

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Posted: 2007-01-30 06:47:21 Post subject:

荷梦愚笨，看了半天才明白为什么有些字会变粗。呵呵！那几句宋词恰巧是前一阵心血来潮背熟的呢，所以写时，刚好派上了用场——看来今后还得多往脑瓜子里塞点东西，呵呵~~~

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Posted: 2007-01-30 08:56:01 Post subject:

夜之门最易洞开的是诗之路

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Posted: 2007-01-30 22:50:15 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

荷梦愚笨，看了半天才明白为什么有些字会变粗。呵呵！
那几句宋词恰巧是前一阵心血来潮背熟的呢，所以写时，刚好派上了用场——看来今后还得多往脑瓜子里塞点东西，呵呵~~~

就爱开玩笑

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Posted: 2007-02-01 01:44:45 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

夜之门最易洞开的是诗之路

呵呵,应该是那样的。问好白水！

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Posted: 2007-02-01 01:57:24 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

荷梦 wrote:

就爱开玩笑

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真心话！

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