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(独领风骚-诗中的配图艺术)狠狠地伤你一次,转身就走,再不回头! Previous  [1]2
红袖添乱
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PostPosted: 2008-02-06 17:28:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗盗,不错,真很好。玩到这里玩得有意思了

悠子。来试试看。。。看图说话还真不错。。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-07 02:46:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!落尘暂时以此模式经营看看,只是互动的节奏可能会减缓。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-07 06:11:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
谢谢!落尘暂时以此模式经营看看,只是互动的节奏可能会减缓。


不用有一定的模式,随大家的兴致好了~~~~
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PostPosted: 2008-02-07 09:23:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

袖儿和诗盗的两首都很强烈,先入为主,霸占了画的主题。我想静都静不下来。试着
想给画一个不同的色彩,不知道达没达到效果。 先来垫个底儿。

独爱这城市的夜光
静逸,辉煌,紫色的苍茫
无所欲求,没有声响
如你温润的目光

你轻风般,敲开夜的窗
慰籍细碎的忧伤,翻开
矜持的渴望
于是不再想静看
一些月的升,日的落

站在梦的这头
着一袭洁白的盛装
用一种最美的姿势,走向你
走向飞溅的绚烂,纷纷扬扬
02/07/2008
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PostPosted: 2008-02-07 12:13:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子的意思是越到后面越不容易写?好像有道理,可是又有些矛盾。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-08 06:31:52    Post subject: Re: 交作业! Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
香在永恒.......


诗盗这首,漂亮。把图配上,效果很好。



举手举脚同意 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-02-11 22:49:50    Post subject: 远去的背影 Reply with quote

望着你远去的背影
撩乱了你消失的天空

五彩的帘幕
忽近忽远地飘动

可怜的夸夫
有没有追到那太阳的彩虹

眨了眨眼睛
依然分不出这是白天还是黑夜的梦
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PostPosted: 2008-02-12 12:49:57    Post subject: Re: 远去的背影 Reply with quote

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望着你远去的背影
...


有缘兄要不要把这首作品拉到版面上增开一贴,一来您可收入文集,二来我好放进目录。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-13 14:45:02    Post subject: Re: 远去的背影 Reply with quote

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是有缘 wrote:
望着你远去的背影
...


有缘兄要不要把这首作品拉到版面上增开一贴,一来您可收入文集,二来我好放进目录。


好的.
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PostPosted: 2008-02-15 14:49:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

午夜
弥漫着紫色的迷乱的殇
有绪 无章
熏衣草的味道
氤氲着她寂寞的体香

暗夜
是一张撕不开的网
纠缠 挣扎
关于往事的记忆
仅仅是她绝望的臆想
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PostPosted: 2008-02-15 23:16:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

爱爱 wrote:
午夜
...

喜欢爱爱这首
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PostPosted: 2008-02-28 09:06:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

这是落尘独领风骚单元第一个实验成功的贴子,谢谢红袖提出的做法,也谢谢朋友们。
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