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PostPosted: 2008-02-05 17:29:18    Post subject: 渡口 Reply with quote

一群人荒芜在
废弃的渡口
雪，白茫茫
天地越来越宽

一只无处藏匿的乌鸦
盘旋于一棵虚拟的树
夕阳把它的叫声
打扮得花枝招展
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PostPosted: 2008-02-05 17:32:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
不像是祝新年快乐的诗。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-05 17:37:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
乌鸦就不过新年了么Smile
又有分别了不是？ Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-02-05 17:43:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
拈花微笑 wrote:
乌鸦就不过新年了么Smile
又有分别了不是？ Laughing

我猜乌鸦也应该过，　如果它们也和我们人用同一个日历.
乌鸦与偶们不该分别么？
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PostPosted: 2008-02-05 19:05:52    Post subject: Reply with quote
哈哈，有趣的对答
我就是无涯，过的黑历
乌鸦娶了晚霞做联
妻是红绸地
我唯墨渍飞


好诗。我是说你的。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-05 20:16:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
博弈 wrote:
哈哈，有趣的对答
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谢博弈兄阅读
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PostPosted: 2008-02-05 20:18:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
悠子 wrote:
拈花微笑 wrote:
乌鸦就不过新年了么Smile
又有分别了不是？ Laughing

我猜乌鸦也应该过，　如果它们也和我们人用同一个日历.
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乌鸦与偶们有何分别？ Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: 2008-02-05 20:20:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
拈花微笑 wrote:
乌鸦与偶们有何分别？ Rolling Eyes

没有吗？　我一直很傻的以为有呢，　还特别８喜欢乌鸦。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-06 02:53:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
经查网证实，乌鸦与人类计算时间的规格并不相同。
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