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七绝—除夕

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-02-04 17:08:15 Post subject: 七绝—除夕

彩灯璀璨暗星光，竹爆欢鸣颂小窗。夤夜歌诗辞旧岁，黎明赋律庆新阳。

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-02-04 23:38:02 Post subject: Re: 七绝—除夕

和莹雪《除夕》星云烂漫夜金光，老少欢呼又倚窗。雪后风情写春意，我从黎明待初阳。下面是莹雪的彩灯璀璨暗星光，竹爆欢鸣颂小窗。夤夜歌诗辞旧岁，黎明赋律庆新阳。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-02-05 00:23:03 Post subject: Re: 七绝—除夕

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

和莹雪《除夕》
...

回和《守岁》
寒梅送雪秀星光，暖阁迎人望雅窗。
竹爆顽童欢笑去，酒芳闲叟醉朝阳。

老山
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Posted: 2008-02-05 02:25:55 Post subject: 和莹雪《除夕》

和莹雪《除夕》声声爆竹绽金光，剪纸红花贴小窗。灵鼠登台辞旧岁，黎明酒醒是新阳。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-02-05 06:03:51 Post subject:

鼠咬天开,雪后新阳. 祝贺新年,文采飞扬. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-02-05 16:24:25 Post subject: Re: 和莹雪《除夕》

老山 wrote:

和莹雪《除夕》
...

回和老山《除夕》
年年竹爆闪电光，岁岁烟花闹素窗。
玉鼠新来鸣子夜，金猪旧别睡朝阳。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-02-05 16:25:55 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

鼠咬天开,雪后新阳.

祝贺新年,文采飞扬.

谢谢您的祝福！

wenshan
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Posted: 2008-02-05 20:43:46 Post subject: Re: 七绝—除夕

莹雪 wrote:

彩灯璀璨暗星光，竹爆欢鸣颂小窗。
夤夜歌诗辞旧岁，黎明赋律庆新阳。

奉和莹雪《除夕》

辞岁屠苏守烛光，小梅疏影靓初妆。
乡心此夜千般愿，雪遁冰销起艳阳。

(加拿大/闻山)
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枫叶国-闻山

老山
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Posted: 2008-02-06 10:22:32 Post subject: Re: 和莹雪《除夕》

莹雪 wrote:

老山 wrote:

和莹雪《除夕》
...

回和老山《除夕》
...

再和雪莹《除夕》

今宵除夕无星光，
但有烟花亮小窗。
一夜吟来诗万首，
只为送旧咏新阳。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-02-06 19:08:05 Post subject: Re: 七绝—除夕

wenshan wrote:

奉和莹雪《除夕》
...

奉和闻山《除夕》
别岁无眠至曙光，幽魂弄影巧新装。
旅人梦了思乡愿，归雁闲吟话艳阳。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-02-06 19:11:23 Post subject: Re: 和莹雪《除夕》

[quote="老山"]

莹雪 wrote:

再和雪莹《除夕》

今宵除夕无星光，
但有烟花亮小窗。
一夜吟来诗万首，
只为送旧咏新阳。

回和老山《除夕》
楹联携韵颂东光，
贴福怀诗赋小窗。
佳语欢声歌子夜，
妙言喜句醉朝阳。

duzhi
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Posted: 2008-02-06 19:42:31 Post subject:

太精彩了,我只能独辟蹊径了: 除夕其乐融融爆竹欢，八方援手赈江南。新开景色归乡里，老去流年出海关。雪到融时皆瑞气，春逢花季更斑斓。多情最是苍茫月，痴等元宵一夜圆。 _________________ 清狂傲世随天性,仗义疏财任我行。博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/duzhizhang440

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Posted: 2008-02-06 20:50:24 Post subject: Re: 七绝—除夕

莹雪 wrote:

彩灯璀璨暗星光，竹爆欢鸣颂小窗。
夤夜歌诗辞旧岁，黎明赋律庆新阳。

和莹雪《除夕》

白驹过隙叹时光，初上华灯映小窗。
辞旧不闻竹爆响，心中默默庆子阳。

mm新春快乐！

冰清
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Posted: 2008-02-07 12:05:37 Post subject:

Happy Chinese New Year to everyone.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-02-07 18:04:15 Post subject:

喜庆七绝贺新年。MM新年快乐！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-02-07 19:18:19 Post subject:

duzhi wrote:

太精彩了,我只能独辟蹊径了:
...

呵呵，谢谢！过年好

回和《新年》
鼓乐悠悠笑语欢，清芳倩影唤梅仙。
今朝醉卧歌诗意，去岁闲游赋妙联。
送雪怀幽抒旧月，迎风思雅谢新年。
金猪困睡酣眠里，玉鼠精神闹上元。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-02-07 19:44:13 Post subject: Re: 七绝—除夕

晓松 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

彩灯璀璨暗星光，竹爆欢鸣颂小窗。
夤夜歌诗辞旧岁，黎明赋律庆新阳。

和莹雪《除夕》
...

回和晓松兄《除夕》
金乌西下弄霞光，五彩霓虹映暖窗。
别旧幽歌词妙曲，迎新赋律庆朝阳。
晓松gg过年好 thanks

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-02-07 19:52:50 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

Happy Chinese New Year to everyone.

过年好

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-02-07 19:54:24 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

喜庆七绝贺新年。MM新年快乐！

GG过年好

扁舟
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Posted: 2008-02-09 06:37:24 Post subject:

用的是新韵？

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