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我的城市
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PostPosted: 2008-02-03 02:51:20    Post subject: 我的城市 Reply with quote

.我的城市.

题记:美是岁月沉淀的金

我奔跑在我的城市
春是绚烂的红
夏是明艳的黄
秋是遐思的紫
冬是静寂的蓝

我澎湃在我的城市
晶莹在柔骨间徜徉
爱与痛的祥云
笑与泣的碎雨
梦与醒的流光
魂与魄的交融

我恣意在我的城市
风情在微风中挥洒
静静地卧
慵懒地坐
娇媚地笑
妖娆地舞

我沉淀在我的城市
弃了污浊的血肉
白玉的骨在日光下行走
水晶的魂在风雨间抒怀
定格的影在凝视中沉淀

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PostPosted: 2008-02-03 16:05:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

水晶的魂在风雨间抒怀
定格的影在凝视中沉淀
................这首应发在"现代诗歌"版块.
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 19:48:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的诗歌
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 20:07:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

Embarassed 发错地方了,烦版主帮移动下.
谢二位来读,请多指正
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 20:11:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

好的,给你移一下。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 23:08:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

尾句不错!
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