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俗气也是一种颜色,击毙
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 00:32:18    Post subject: 俗气也是一种颜色,击毙 Reply with quote

俗气也是一种颜色,击毙

1。
在爱与不爱的那三年间
我们每天三点的咖啡
每天三点我们的咖啡
咖啡三点我们的每天
每天三点咖啡的我们
。。。每天
杯子和杯子聊了很多
你从未说过我老了
只一回, 为你续杯
你说我的姿态有新古典味

我们聊了很多很多咖啡
直到咖啡西下, 现代诗
点起街灯

2。
说过我狗死的事几回
你说不像诗
今天又改了几字
你感动了, 不为诗不为狗
为了这写诗的你的宠物

3。
蒙娜丽莎在任何角度都微笑
我的诗也想如此
复制它的时候请以斜斜的角度
复制的时候请想到我想给她画个八字胡

4。
我的头很大
眼前的世界更大
头痛的由来

来给我揉揉
头或世界

5。
打死新年
打死王老五
去年欠的钱




胡诌几笔,祝各位新年快乐!!
Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 01:15:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

倒很喜欢这胡诌的诗歌. 轻松却不乏内涵
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 07:36:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

你感动了, 不为诗不为狗
为了这写诗的你的宠物

这个意向很动情~~~~
;))))))))

很被宠~~~
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 07:53:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

在爱与不爱的那三年间
我们每天三点的咖啡
每天三点我们的咖啡
咖啡三点我们的每天
每天三点咖啡的我们
。。。每天
杯子和杯子聊了很多
你从未说过我老了
只一回, 为你续杯
你说我的姿态有新古典味

我们聊了很多很多咖啡
直到咖啡西下, 现代诗
点起街灯


捣鼓得好,还没被整晕~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 09:50:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

胡诌的, 偶看得懂~
新年快乐
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 23:24:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

是嘛,还是喜欢博弈写这样子的作品,不觉着与俗气相关呢。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-03 11:43:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

蒙娜丽莎在任何角度都微笑
我的诗也想如此

嗯, 好意向~喜欢
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PostPosted: 2008-02-03 15:21:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

总是最喜欢看博弈老师的信手涂鸦,哈哈,有提前活过下一辈子的感觉。。。 Razz
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PostPosted: 2008-02-03 15:45:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

还是不错的!!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-03 17:04:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

爱爱 wrote:
蒙娜丽莎在任何角度都微笑
我的诗也想如此

嗯, 好意向~喜欢


此愛愛是彼愛愛麽, 抱一個``` Cool
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PostPosted: 2008-02-03 17:22:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

点点儿 wrote:
爱爱 wrote:
蒙娜丽莎在任何角度都微笑
我的诗也想如此

嗯, 好意向~喜欢


此爱爱是彼爱爱么, 抱一个‘‘‘ Cool


可以!门口右转,左手边有个摊位,那里领号码牌去。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 14:08:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

点点儿 wrote:
爱爱 wrote:
蒙娜丽莎在任何角度都微笑
我的诗也想如此

嗯, 好意向~喜欢


此愛愛是彼愛愛麽, 抱一個``` Cool


抱抱点点~~给你加塞~~~呵呵呵~~~
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 14:12:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
点点儿 wrote:
爱爱 wrote:
蒙娜丽莎在任何角度都微笑
我的诗也想如此

嗯, 好意向~喜欢


此爱爱是彼爱爱么, 抱一个‘‘‘ Cool


可以!门口右转,左手边有个摊位,那里领号码牌去。


嘿嘿, 去了, 发号码的人说你今天的号早在一个月前就已经发完了~~~因为DD超负荷做拥抱工作影响健康, 不能再许我们加塞了Sad
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 18:14:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

小2,,,最好看。博弈兄新年好!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 18:18:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
小2,,,最好看。博弈兄新年好!


加塞!啥意思?看不懂,茉给我说说?

再编辑:读成闽南语很难听耶!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 18:25:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
小2,,,最好看。博弈兄新年好!


加塞!啥意思?看不懂,茉给我说说?
...


加塞,,,就是插队,比如,我俩先到的人排队排一块买菜,可后来的人想先买,就插进去了,他先买了,我们先到的反而跑后头去了,,,瞧,说的多生动。懂了吧。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 18:31:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
小2,,,最好看。博弈兄新年好!


加塞!啥意思?看不懂,茉给我说说?
...


加塞,,,就是插队,比如,我俩先到的人排队排一块买菜,可后来的人想先买,就插进去了,他先买了,我们先到的反而跑后头去了,,,瞧,说的多生动。懂了吧。


喔~~这样!不过你举的例子不好,因为这种情况不会出现。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 18:36:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,,,打比方嘛,怕你都懂不是。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-04 18:37:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

哎呀,怕你不懂不是,,,打错字,,,哈,莫怪!
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