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色系列之二:黑
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PostPosted: 2008-01-31 17:10:34    Post subject: 色系列之二:黑 Reply with quote

色系列之二:



不管你愿不愿意
始终与白如影形随
影子始终在阳光底下
朗朗乾坤
一团乌云遮天敝日
一把雪白的利剑
刺破天的黑幕
雨过天晴
过滤黑色的心情

每一个人都握着
黑与白的两支笔
不可或缺
白是人生的最初一笔
歪歪扭扭留下痕迹
而黑则是学会了宽容
所有酸甜苦辣的色彩
悉数包容沉淀

穿白衣裙的女孩
在男人眼里很高贵
像一朵绽开的黑牡丹
而披黑风衣的男生
在女人看来很诱惑
像一匹洒脱的白马

黑是上帝手中
另一支笔
太阳上的黑斑
就像美人痣
长在美人的脸上
黑洞吞噬一切
就连光明也不例外
人们诅咒黑

白与黑
生与死的两极
不管你愿不愿意
都要从容走过
留下多彩的脚印
没有凤凰涅槃
哪有新生命的诞生?

欢迎光临时东兵的博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1246222181
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-02-01 18:00:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错,提读.
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 01:38:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

解释多过诗意,还没到突破的程度,诗意出不来双彩虹的效果,问好。。
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