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				|  Posted: 2008-01-31 23:32:22    Post subject: Polymorphism |   |  
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				| Deep into the mirror of wall, I watch you
 shifting in hundreds of forms.
 
 What a great wall
 that chains across your fingertips
 to the end of another world.
 I see a shadow moving in a snowman's suit
 tranformed
 to a green tree full of gifts
 
 You are gifted
 with hands creating the most exquisite food
 out of plain materials;
 Or in a rush, you washed sands into gold grains;
 Or in a swift of wand,
 you dug a tunnel
 through the roughest mountains.
 
 Are these just rumours?
 Stories have become legends, some gone with the wind
 some been buried beneath the snow
 with bones clacking under railways.
 
 Tears of words scatter over the wounds of ice.
 How could a banana peel into a white skin?
 I will hold back
 what cannot possibly be translated.
 
 Almost a hundred years later,
 a figure, carved out of stone,
 stands up with a tall tower
 against the blue gigantic sky.
 
 Who is it?
 murmur the rustling snowflakes.
 
 Through a piece of glass, I see him
 breathing in fires.
 A dragon lost its wings?
 How could such a tiny creature
 be the descendant of a giant species.
 
 Who am I?
 echo the trembling maple leaves.
 
 I scrutinize every cell of you
 under a microscope.
 Do we possess the same type of genes?
 I simulate all kinds of theses
 by computer programming.
 
 There might be no big differences,
 regardless of the shapes of heirloom faces.
 We might even share the same origin,
 like streams merging into a river.
 
 At the top of mother-
 land stands that mighty Man
 with his descedents migrated
 across mountains and plateaus
 through the distance of time,
 you and me, joined, and our children
 and our children's children
 
 like rivers flowing
 into the ocean
 of human beings
 
 Into the future,
 I stand
 looking back
 into the mirror of history
 reflecting, evolving...
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2008-02-01 17:50:58    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 思绪万千, 内敛深沉. 有些SPELLING似需检查, 可能是打字有误.
 I see a shadow moving in a snowman's suit
 tranformed
 
 regardless of the colors of sunsetting.
 At the top of motherland
 
 
 stands that mighty Man
 with descedents migrated
 across mountains and plateaus
 through the distance of time,
 you and me, joined, and our children
 
 另,有些句子不太好理解, 比如:At the top of motherland. 仅为商榷, 不妥见谅.
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-02-01 22:49:37    Post subject: |   |  
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		| 戴玨 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2008-02-02 09:55:26    Post subject: |   |  
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				| some been buried beneath the snow 
 regardless of the colors of sunset
 
 stands that mighty Man
 with (his?) descedents migrated
 
 looking back
 (into?) the mirror of history
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				|  Posted: 2008-02-02 10:06:42    Post subject: |   |  
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				| thanks for your comments i will come back to correct and refine these points
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		| William Zhou周道模 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-02-18 17:38:04    Post subject: |   |  
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				| very good! deep,thick, wide; history, now,future; emotion,idea,imagination and so 
 on. congrantulation!
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