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微笑很美好(五首)
闽北阿秀
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Joined: 20 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-01-31 04:14:05    Post subject: 微笑很美好(五首) Reply with quote

《在远方》

在走廊上
给你发短信。夜里的雨,停歇了
我要告诉你,看得到的远山,笼罩在雾霭里
轮廓隐约。某车站
长长的列车,神龙般藏头不见尾。不知道
是向南走,还是
朝北开

《睡眠》

穿红色吊带睡衣的你
此刻一定睡着了,白天想说而没说完的话,留在梦里

守时的灯光,太阳还未完全落山
已经亮起
严密的窗帘,雪白的床单
你侧身,呼吸均匀,稍为宽松的睡衣
乳沟时隐时现

山城的那列火车,在你离开后驶出了站台
惊扰某个人的睡眠

《微笑很美好》

已经深夜一点
你应该沉浸在睡眠里了
可以不说话,不去思想,于是很安静
我噼里啪啦的键盘声,喋喋不休的叮嘱,你都不用听了
经过几小时的动荡
你暂时远离喧嚣,远离俗世的烦恼
此刻,在异地独自酣睡的你
姿态那么美好,线条那么美好,微笑仍然保持得那么美好
跟在我面前一样

《安静》

稻田,满眼的绿
饱满的谷穗,始终低垂着头,不看蓝天
没有风,弯弯曲曲的路向前延伸
通向山顶的三清宫。我和她保持一定距离
走得很安静

《无法安静》

将雨未雨
下午的天空布满浓云,灰蒙蒙的背景
山路越挂越高,越远越细
红色背影,移动并渐渐远去。转弯,被灌木丛隐没
再没回头

周围一片寂静
突然怀念纯净的鸟鸣,不能释然
树叶坠落,竟也毫无声息
仿佛飘落于水面,只是没有涟漪,它们在我心里
一圈一圈荡开
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嘉慕思
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Joined: 12 Jan 2008
Posts: 78
Location: 佳木斯
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PostPosted: 2008-01-31 19:23:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

感觉不错.
欣赏这种自然流畅的叙述.
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2008-02-01 06:56:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿秀的诗歌总能把情和景很好结合,文笔清新,如涓涓溪流,浸润心灵~
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金金
进士出身


Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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PostPosted: 2008-02-02 02:09:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

安心的欣赏
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