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七绝—腊梅

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-23 00:06:33 Post subject: 七绝—腊梅

腊岁诗魂写意新，辞冬疏影沁芳晨。回眸坎坷悲欢去，淡化虚名为报春。

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Posted: 2008-01-29 14:52:20 Post subject:

“淡化虚名为报春” 喜欢！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-29 16:56:50 Post subject:

谢谢！

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Posted: 2008-01-29 20:42:02 Post subject:

回眸坎坷悲欢去，淡化虚名为报春。当是有感而发~

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-29 22:35:45 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

回眸坎坷悲欢去，淡化虚名为报春。当是有感而发~

谢谢晓松兄点评！略抒襟怀。

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-01-30 04:46:43 Post subject:

回眸坎坷悲欢去，淡化虚名为报春。心态平和，欣赏。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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Posted: 2008-01-30 11:31:53 Post subject:

结句的确佳妙,让争名于市逐利于朝者汗颜. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-30 16:11:04 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

回眸坎坷悲欢去，淡化虚名为报春。

心态平和，欣赏。

谢谢点评！

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Posted: 2008-01-30 18:47:36 Post subject:

立意高，心态好。问好MM。

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Posted: 2008-01-30 19:37:56 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

结句的确佳妙,让争名于市逐利于朝者汗颜.

谢谢您的点评？

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-30 19:38:57 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

立意高，心态好。问好MM。

谢谢点评！问好GG。

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