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【空心人】

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Posted: 2008-01-29 23:39:15 Post subject: 【空心人】

【空心人】门，突然打开有人扬长而去，带走了什么连同屋内积攒的点点温度老屋很冷。而大雪正浓雪会说话，脚下咯吱咯吱...... 她说不痛，踩玻璃一样好听树枝上晃着脱脂的枯叶北风吹响。里面住着一个空心人

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Posted: 2008-01-30 00:09:13 Post subject:

配画诗挺好！轻灵的跳跃！简洁的素描！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2008-01-30 03:37:36 Post subject:

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配画诗挺好！轻灵的跳跃！简洁的素描！

问好山城子老师～

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Posted: 2008-01-30 04:01:17 Post subject:

雪会说话：脚下“咯吱咯吱” 她说不痛，踩玻璃一样好听树枝上晃着脱脂的枯叶北风吹响。里面住着一个空心人喜欢～～ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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Posted: 2008-01-30 07:20:27 Post subject:

明月这首很不错呢!! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2008-02-02 02:07:56 Post subject:

很轻灵，不自然。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2008-02-02 02:38:41 Post subject:

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雪会说话：脚下“咯吱咯吱”
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问好，春节快乐！

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Posted: 2008-02-02 02:42:49 Post subject:

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明月这首很不错呢!!

谢溪语，新春快乐！

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Posted: 2008-02-02 02:43:44 Post subject:

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很轻灵，不自然。

金金回来了啊，新年快乐！

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Posted: 2008-02-03 05:57:17 Post subject:

明月春节好！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2008-02-04 01:07:30 Post subject:

反复地读了几遍，作为配图诗，充分地利用了图片，挖掘出更多的内涵，很好！

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Posted: 2008-02-04 10:32:57 Post subject:

门突然打开，有人扬长而去，孤独的老屋很冷而大雪正浓脚下“咯吱咯吱” 像踩玻璃一样好听雪说:“不痛” 不痛！北风，摇曳着门前脱脂的枯叶里面住着一个空心人很喜欢这个意境，我也来写一写，明月喜欢那一种。嘻嘻~~ 不好意思，看见喜欢的诗就手痒，，，，，祝你春节愉快！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-02-09 06:01:19 Post subject:

描述表达决绝，不拖沓。是功力的体现。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-02-09 18:25:12 Post subject:

灵动，清脆～问好月月！过年好！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-02-09 22:11:33 Post subject:

问好.... _________________ 我是一片沉睡的海渴望苏醒的日子不会到来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1259454194

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Posted: 2008-02-12 06:23:19 Post subject:

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反复地读了几遍，作为配图诗，充分地利用了图片，挖掘出更多的内涵，很好！

荷梦春节愉快!不好意思,回复迟了

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Posted: 2008-02-12 06:25:36 Post subject:

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门突然打开，有人
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呵呵，修改下,另一种味儿，不错~春节好!

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Posted: 2008-02-12 06:30:30 Post subject:

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描述表达决绝，不拖沓。是功力的体现。

新春快乐，问好NY~

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Posted: 2008-02-12 06:45:41 Post subject:

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灵动，清脆～

问好月月！过年好！

春节好,阿琼~

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