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几首关于春天旧作共勉
秋叶
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PostPosted: 2008-01-27 11:10:02    Post subject: 几首关于春天旧作共勉 Reply with quote

春节快到了, 贴上几首关于春天旧作共勉, 并望斧正。


丽日驱寒尽,
春花竞斗妍。
人生如快马,
拼搏又新年。


岭外初春翠,
涌流飘彩纱。
崖边林下望,
又见旧时花。


春寒韶韵在,
晖映动人心。
莹彩有高洁,
雪峰传籁音。


飘云影绿池,
摇柳写新诗。
黄鹂不知倦,
春风日出时。


春山烟雨聚,
归燕舞升平,
万树凝香雪,
遥闻涧水声。



雪压春花未可妍,
平湖波静起寒烟。
归心已寄秋鸿去,
遥望长天又一年。
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2008-01-27 11:37:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

沁透了春的欢快和生机

万树凝香雪,
遥闻涧水声。

静观, 远望, 有声有色, 令人神往.
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2008-01-27 12:55:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶春曲早,旧词意境高。

跟一首 五绝 早春

岁末飘然去,山原雪已稀。
一朝春信至,万木竞新枝。
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戴玨
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PostPosted: 2008-01-27 14:40:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

七絕最好!
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2008-01-27 17:13:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

几乎每首都含“春”,春意盎然~
问好秋叶兄!
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-01-27 17:41:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

这组春之颂歌,的确七绝最好,七绝的结尾两句最好
问好秋叶..
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暗香如沁
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PostPosted: 2008-01-27 19:59:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

也喜七绝.春机昂然中.
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-01-28 17:48:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏
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不亦悦乎
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PostPosted: 2008-01-29 14:39:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢第二首,七绝更好!
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